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Synesisbassist


A washed up old writer who still tries to live in a heyday that has long since passed...

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Okay this was epic! Please tell me there is going to be a sequel to this! Oh master of horse horsewords and ponysmut please I beg of you. Also firsties!

9176724
With an ending like that? There has to be a sequel. /)

Was pretty good, even though it's not my thing, was still a fun read 👍

Maybe add fetish tag? Considering Consensual Non-con and choking

I woke up to late to be first but again good story and outcome

If I don't see I sequel to this imma hunt you down mate

Forreal though, awesome story, all da feels :heart:

consensual rape

Well, that's an interesting term. Now I'm curious.

9177080
It's all I could really find to apply. In the part where (you) stick your hand in her shorts, she says "no" and clearly struggles. My intent was to imply that Spitfire only picked on you was because she thought you were kinda attractive.

Hope I'm not causing confusion.:twilightsheepish:

I had to read this if only for that dang trigger warning... I regret nothing.

That Fleetfoot cameo. :rainbowlaugh:

Haven't read this yet but with the reviews and description, I'll give it a read and give my thoughts.

Does anyone else see a sequel with Spits, Fleet and the Cadet?

Bravo, Syn very well done and a good read!

9178314
There's no such thing. A woman raping a man is just rape.

9178429
Reverse rape is bondage

9178941
No it isn't. Reverse rape is used to describe a woman raping a man.

9177080
wouldn't that just be regular sex then?

This is definitely a matter of some controversy and debate, but I would say the term that should be used in the trigger warning is dubcon. By some definitions, dubcon is where consent is not given (but not denied, either), or if a character gives consent but isn't really in a position to do so (like if they're out of their mind in heat, or in a position of very little power compared to their partner, where saying no doesn't feel like much of an option. By that definition, this story definitely wouldn't count, since Spitfire explicitly says no, but the protagonist keeps going.

I'd say, though, that it matters more for tagging how the character feels about the event afterwards. I think that affects the tone of the story a lot more, and how people will feel reading it. If a character does not consent, or actively denies consent, then is forced into it anyway and soon finds that (thanks to porn logic, which does not happen in real life) they enjoy it and want more, I'd say that counts as dubcon. If the character leaves happy, I think a lot of readers will too.

Whereas if the character is forced into the same situation and hates it, and goes through the experience desperately wanting to get away, ending with them feeling beaten, humiliated and violated, then I'd say that's noncon. And it makes a very different story, one I personally am not at all keen on. So that's where I'd draw the line between the two. Maybe that's just because I'm ok with one and not the other, and I'm perverting definitions for my own ends, but hopefully others can at least see what I mean. So I'd have put the warning label as dubcon for this story, I think.

9180641
I've been looking for the proper term to use for a few days now! Thanks!:yay:

You’ve developed an interesting dialogue here, Synny

9177133
If only there was more beyond just the cameo.

But still good regardless.

9185617
If only if only... The cries rang out into the night, and in the distance... A lone Ponyo scribbled as quickly as he could, a grin on his muzzle.

Ending is vague for a reason~

9185678
I know, and I look forward to more. Just sometimes people not following through with their vague endings sometimes.

I also wasn't trying to come off as insulting. Just having fun because I also know the person I responded to.

9186102
We know each other? :trollestia:

And now I hear this ending had a purpose other then comady? Oh, I can hardly wait. Laughs maniacally

Always nice to have more sexy anthro Spitfire fics.

Nice piece of smut wrapped up in a bit of story. It seemed to me that Spits has been crushin' on the cadet for a little while. He was certainly attracted to her despite she not being his favorite mare at the moment. The cameo at the end has my hopes up for some group 'activities' if not the start of a polyamorous relationship. My only qualm was the questionable consent when they started. Otherwise, great job! Thanks for creating and sharing!

9185678
I have to ask are you making a sequel to this with both Spitfire and fleet foot

9322133
There has been a a bit of interest in that, only the future will be able to tell~ I will get to it probably sometime right in the new year, got a few too many projects to finish up before the end of the year. But it will be coming! :yay:

9322145
Easily this is one of my favorite 'smut' fics. -gives a look of you lucky bastard- ain't that the truth?

OMG!!! Dawno nie czytałam tak dobrego opowiadania!! Napiszesz kontynuacje? Proszę

9322145
I know it’s been a couple of years but I figured I might ask this again is there a plan for a sequel or no

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