Spike Dragon has always had a hard and unfair life on Earth so when his best often to take him to another world he agrees, only to find about some cultural differences
“Because Spike I-I love you,” she said nervously, much to his surprise.
ahhh/awwww (i can never remember which it is), she avoided the awkward situations that arise from not telling him for awhile right out the starting gate. of course, now we get to read all the awkward situations that always arise not long after the confession. so, evens out.
If Spike knew more about Equestrian culture, then he probably would have known Twilight wasn't talking about in just a platonic way.
lol. saw that coming. the wording of the summary left very few possibilities though her saying "for being a non-pony and a stallion" left a few other possibilities at the door.
Ok, but if the mares wants some love from the drake, they're have to ask the lead mate first. Of course we might know who the lead mate is...
To many grammatical errors. But good all the same.
Grab yourself and editor and you got a story.
its starting good, lets hope the next chapters will be way wayWAAAAY longer then this
"You can stay with for as long as you want."Twilight said /need to add the word me after with/
"Spike I know that the orphan is kicking you out /should be orphanage/ although the way it is pretty funny
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You have a grammatical error in your own comment.
ahhh/awwww (i can never remember which it is), she avoided the awkward situations that arise from not telling him for awhile right out the starting gate. of course, now we get to read all the awkward situations that always arise not long after the confession. so, evens out.
lol. saw that coming. the wording of the summary left very few possibilities though her saying "for being a non-pony and a stallion" left a few other possibilities at the door.
I'm loving this start and can't wait to see what else this story his to offer.