Okay i must say that chaos gods must have blessed you more than Abbadon, not only do you carry extremely rare weapons like power sword and, power shield? wouldn't that be then assault shield or suppression shield? anyway how can you fire your bolter (with specialised ammo no less where did you get thous, they are not just lying around?) without breaking every single bone in your hand because you did not say that you had power armor to compensate that massive recoil?
Okay i must say that chaos gods must have blessed you more than Abbadon, not only do you carry extremely rare weapons like power sword and, power shield? wouldn't that be then assault shield or suppression shield? anyway how can you fire your bolter (with specialised ammo no less where did you get thous, they are not just lying around?) without breaking every single bone in your hand because you did not say that you had power armor to compensate that massive recoil?
Pretty good but you should get an editor for those slight grammar errors.