The Third Reich war effort had turned their attention to create, and develop a super weapon to turn the tides of War. Their Scientist create what do they believe to be a 'Time Machine' and requires a volunteer to test it. Rudolf Von Schreiner is the first and also the last volunteer to test the Time Machine, instead of sending him into the past, he was 'accidentally' went to another dimension. Into a magical land of Equestria, where Friendship is Magic.
Author Note : Anyway, sorry for not trying hard enough and one last thing.
English is not my first language.
Cheers.
Chapters (3)
YEY MOAR WWII PONE CROSSOVER
I VILL READ IT FOR DEUTSCHLAND
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Nazis in Equestria? Why do I have a knacking suspicion that Rarity would be most receptive to their doctrine?
Also, inb4 Americans teleport to fight the Germans in this new, unfamiliar, adorable warfront.
i think all the dislikes are from nazi haters
Good and funny story man, I'd love to edit alot of these simple grammar/spelling mistakes you've made tho
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Well, thanks. But I don't think I will continue this, this is entirely for fun anyway xD
I was bored at the time so why not I write something that could possibly gain a lot of dislike?
And boy, it gained a lot.
For all of you VERY offended people (Especially those who REALLY hates Nazi Germany), boy I've got a good news for you. This story might be revoked and disappear out from Fimfiction entirely, if it reached more than 50+ dislike. So better hurry up and log in into your alt account to remove this fic entirely.
Like these Germans that punched through Ardennes and steam rolling some Baguettes and Tea's with their Panzers. Also don't forget the Stuka's, they played excellent role on supporting the Panzers that had been rolling the Baguettes and Tea's over French and completely rekt them in process. To bad though, the Tea's manage to get out at Dunkirk. Leaving the poor Baguettes alone.
I apologize for those who like this though. I state this once again, I made it for fun only. I did not have any intention to continue this series further as I am writing something more serious.
For now... We shall stand in Stalingrad. Awaiting for the Fuhrer to order a retreat.
Cheers. :P
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Cheers amigo thanks for the silly story, sorry that it might get deleted by snowflakes, but I doubt it will. If you ever need anyone to read over, or edit your works just message me, I'll be more than proud to do it for free
Why all the hate?
When I said that HiE writers are nazis, this was not what I meant.
Also I never siad that and it'd be deliciously ironic if I ever said anything that asinine. Aside from the grammar from the description alone, this just seems to be using nazis for the shock value. Not that I want people to be using nazis in a serious MLP fanfiction, because the sentence "Nazis in a MLP fanfiction" shouldn't be uttered. Plus The Mare from Germaney did the whole nazi thing better, since it's not HiE.
Plus, if I have to explain why the slaughter of 5 million people just for having different views than you is wrong, then you have to go sit in the corner and think about your ideals, because Nazis are bad, surprisingly enough. Though I do hope these comments aren't serious, because I'm pretty sure I saw an unironic "snowflake" thrown in there and the last thing I need from this fandom are people who support the Fourth Reich calling people snowflakes because Auschwitz wasn't that bad it was just bad press from those damn Americans.
I think this turned into a tirade against people using nazis as a view grab rather than actually trying to use their strengths as evil motherfuckers like in Wolfenstein or even Call of Duty's Nazi Zombies mode, both of which involve shooting evil Nazis in the goddammed face and there is nothing wrong with it because Nazis are actually evil.
The real kicker that an Indonesian is writing this. Come on, you guys were invaded by Japan, not Germany. I had to do research for that jab, you're welcome.
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People tell you to edit, you reply with 'I just wanted to get the idea out'. Then you get dislike ratings and think it's only because you wrote a nazi fic?
It's derivative, not unique in any way and is badly executed to boot. That it focuses on the side that lost WWII is the least of the problems this fic has. Crowing about potentially offending anonymous people instead of taking criticism seriously makes it clear where your priorities lie.
0/10 for this zero effort controversy bait.
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The people who decide to make alternate accounts to dislike this fic are worse than the ones who commend this trash. This is a HiE wrapped in an offensive and bland concept and it has the comments I think it would from people who only read HiE fics.
Still not as bad as you thinking that people are so offended that they're disliking this on alts rather than you simply writing something bad and offensive. The fact that you're giving up is just sad as well, since you can't even be bothered to take this concept to the end while taking criticism and simply take the coward's way out. Much akin to Hitler himself, funnily enough. I guess for all their talk, Nazis are really just shitty in general and will always crawl away.
So you're a bad author, a nazi sympathiser and worse of all, a quitter. Looking at your other stories, you can't write anything above a single chapter without your ADHD triggering and putting it on Hiatus, if not Cancelled entirely. Maybe put your focus on one story at a time, rather than going with whatever idea you came up with most recently? You might have more fun if you have a good concept that doesn't rely on shock value to draw people in, is all.
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Dude that is very deep...
I've been thinking a lot just by reading your comment,and by this point. You're right. I'm that idiot on the gym who tried all the stuff to get that muscle up in only 1 day. Having none of the muscles, he just gives up and never ever going to gym again and try's to find another way to impress the girls. And I'm one of these peoples.
Yes, I'm not trying hard as I thought it would be, and I should consider that deeply. That is the main problem, not trying hard enough.
Maybe, the way I was raised was one of the factor of me giving things up very quickly. Like my father once told me (like a lot), "If you're doing things that aren't benefits you. Then QUIT!" And me having raised in a strict, and traditional family. Have to obey to parents, even though it was wrong.
Yea my dad is a bitch, if you could say the least. It develop me to lose interest on something so quickly. Such as a story I wrote as a ten years old. I gained a lot of dislike by my family and friends for whatever reason. And discourage me because how shitty I made it and I'm almost depressed at that point, thus I stop trying doing my best on something other than education.
I've been to far telling stories did I? Next time, I should do alot of trying and ignore anything that may discourage me.
Anyway with tears and love, I saluted and thanked you, good sir!
P.S :
With the deepest feeling on my heart.
I apologize to all of you.
All of these dislike and comments, that discourage me for continuing. Shape me to a better man. And teach's me a very valuable lesson.
I will work and try harder next time. A lot HARDER!!
P.P.S :
There was a lot of drama on my last comment didn't it? I apologize again, did not intend to bring personal things up.
Is English your first language?
This seems interesting at the very least. I look forward to seeing more of it. I like what you have so far, so please give me more to look forward to. I can't wait to see how Rudolph continues in this new land.
Awesome!
To all haters fuck you I like this it may have some errors but it has good vision so sorry you have no taste.
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As a jew I'm offended by this story and comment..... JK, I'm joking.... don't lose your shit.
Not saying Nazis are good... Fuck them. But I know some of my fellow Jews, when they see Nazi stuff they go ape shit. Buy at the end of the day, who cares, there are far more important things to worry about... In short, the world is not so black and white.... Its grey.