It's been a long, difficult year, but things have only gotten better over it. Now as the one year anniversary of that day comes closer, the couple could only pause to reflect on what has happened to them.
Rewrite of my original attempt at this Ship, and I feel like I could do a lot better~
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nice start for the rewrite, now I'm curious which changes you got planned
I'm happy to see you writting so much. This looks like a lot of fun.
Interesting. This approach seems slightly more appropriate than the telling Twilight version. Now I just have to wonder how they ended up on another continent.
so this old couple they are staying with dont know they are lesbians
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Thankee, Mad~ ^^
I got some fun things~ (I think at least ^^;)
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Thankee~! ^^
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Well this starts with a pretty big flashback, and Twilight is still gonna play a part~
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Sunset & Octavia don't actually live with the Maison and his wife at this point in time~ ^^
Guess it won't be possible to read your first attempt again (kinda missed some chapters, a bit ashamed :/ )?
If no then don't worry, I'll enjoy this remake.
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I'll do some digging and get it for ya~ ^^
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Thanks a lot :)
Octavia’s mother seems like a salt of the earth person. Wait, no, I mean she will salt the earth after the flames die down.
Good start
talking about sunsets age does make things abit creepy to be honest
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She's... something alright xD
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Thankee~ ^^
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Yup ^^;
But thankfully through the magic of the portal dhe's only 20/21 on Gaia! :'D
Also back in Equestria Octavia and the rest of the cast is older as well in my universes~
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