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I would like to mention first that I really enjoy your story, but I would like to ask something: could you please stop using '&' instead of 'and'? When I first binged through your story I automatically filtered it out, but now that I came back after a while it sticks out like a sore thumb.
Also, some grammar is rather awkward. Have you considered getting someone to proofread this?
And now we wait for the next chapter where we get an explanation for the new title and introduced to the new wills and then learn if Skills is gonna have a plan to get rid of Mother, well get rid of or just flat out sever the connection if possible.
Me:MOOORRRRRAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
You know, I imagine his other parallel will, envy is a nullifier while wrath is a buffer, greed will be a booster while sloth maybe manipulator in the aspect of time. What do you think?
Great chapter. Nice that Luna had some contact with Skills. For Luna is a very information filled conversation that should help them understand not to mess with the Island and Skills. If Luna and Celestia will not go against the Pillars its to hope they smart enough not to aid them. Neutral party kind of. Especially after Skills killed Starprick the Bearded.
Best Luna and Celestia can do is harvesting Starswirls kknowlege and possesions before Skills turn him to a skinned example for hypocritics earning a punishment like true justice demand.
10148241![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I like this idea. Quite Interesse concept
I wonder if Skills will be a Arachno with a human like body in the end. Lets hope Skills find a Changeling in the future. Copy/Stealing 'Shapeshifting' would be perfect. In all aspects of the life it can be used. When ever Skills isnt training magic using skills with his Parallel Wills the use of Shapeshifter can be used to fit in better or simply open more options. Skills cant use weapons & armor? Shape himself hands and blacksmith himself one fitting to his body!
While I won't say it's the most refined story, i love it anyway. Goofy, heart warming, and to the point. Please continue. There are many ways to write a good story and while I doubt it will to everyone's taste, this is one of them. It'd be boring if every story followed all the rules of "perfect story telling".
Thank you for writing more chapter I and others were beginning to worry there wouldn't be more to read. This story is one of my favorites![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
I like the story.... buuuuut .... why a panda ... [edited due to appearing offensive]. No offense to anyone. If you didnt want a pony form theirs wolves tigers dragons etc. If its baised off the manga with the main character being a martial artist bad ass with a panda form atleast he's hot in human form. I found my finger hovering over the dislike button after that chapter but decided to hold off since the story besides that is ok.
Love that ending, he says fuck it and goes back to bed.
Ooh man i hope this lockdown ends soon so we can get more chapters๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I'm glad that I found this story again on fimfiction. Now I don't have to have a separate tab open for fimfetch.
I love this story I hope it comes back soon
Hypocritic mutch once more... Or rather speciest?
Than again, with Spider mothers mind control she might have a point there...