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Welcome back baby Daddy loves you.
So...Celestia,Luna, and Azo's mom are now watching... Oh dear, next time Spider gets a booty call there is going to be a very frustrated trio of mares.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
How'd you manage to get it back?
holy shit death sentence for rapping ponies but really hate Snoop Dog and Coolio
Oh good your back.
Shouts off screen.
"Nancy, cancel my 5:00 with Satan."
Well this seems interesting...
on a side note congrats on getting the story back😏🤘 and hope you keep up with all the other stories as well🙂✌
i also just notice did you intentionally use the song true strength 2 times or was the second one supposed to be a different song?
Yay it's back I so enjoy this story.
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Thanks for telling me. the URL showed me it was different.
YYYYYEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!? IT'S BACK AND IT'S KICKING ASS MORE THEN EVER. WELCOME BACK CAUSE THOSE IDIOTS TRIED TO KILL MORE LIKE YOU BUT FAILED!!!!?🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Great chapter cant wait for more
This is one of my favorite storys
I didn't get a notification again.....Weird.
Why jump 2 taboo levels? There are enougth chances to make it 1 lvl at a time... More impactful!
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I think Skills should kill Star-bitch for his crimes. Very important to spare the others and tell em why one of there group had to die for there collective crimes! Leave his companion alive to shows mercy. If they come for him again kill again 1 and spare the rest with a warning that your mercy for them has run out by the next time they dare attack em.
'IF' they come again and showing they dont learn... Kill there group without mercy.
Great chapter. Amazing story.
I wonder why Celestia and Luna dont confront there 'pillers' if they clearly know there wrong doings... They are literally Demi Gods. If they talk noone would ignore it without hearing em out.
Skill is a about to learn THE Eye skills?!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Bring out the OP eye list!!!
I just hope that it's not that type of story where we get a promise of someone dying, some kind of enemy from the show but it never happens for some reason, for example:
Celestia version where she is evil and tyrannical, main character fights with her, etc but is later redeemed because of stupid reason thought on the spot and it's like she never did anything wrong
Or stupid, naive, evil Starswirl, like here, he never gets punished because the author forgot about that, the story is abandoned or some other reasons
Well, for one.
1.He's a "hero" kinda like Endeavor from MHA.
2.see 1
3.see 2
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First off that was an emotional ending with the Wyvern.
Second I noticed 1 spelling error and a Grammar error: The spelling error is when Celestia said " I fear we made that Spider OUT enemy" I think you meant to say "I fear we made that spider OUR enemy"
The grammar error you made was when Celestia thought (Why do you fucking piss off with every creature in Equestria) what you should of wrote was (why do you fucking piss off every creature in Equestria) you don't need the "with" in that sentence.
I wonder how mutch the Pillars are at fault. The are being tricked, than again they could just refused to do anything... I think they pretty mutch like to be used...
To fuel their hero complex...
This 'kill me i need to die' make absolutely no sence.
Especially if he can be healed. If he can't be healed, than a mercy kill makes sence to give the Spider a massiv level boost to better help his Sons guardian.
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the healing ability with water magic was not entirely certain, and if it worked it would take a long time to heal, it might even not heal well the wounds and turn the dragon into a possible burden, which in the future could force him to sacrifice himself for a more powerful monster, Skill and wryn pony are small and agile so it would be easier for them to dodge and escape
Even if it had only been created to create a plot point for the future, fortunately it had a logical explanation of why it was created, something that not many authors usually think when creating a story without having had a guide