Twilight noticed that she was growing closer to Rainbow, that she felt new feelings she couldn't understand, as she tries to understand them, she'll come to the only possible conclusion she sees.
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Why isn't there a Rainbow Dash tag?
8999867
Because she's not in the story.
Interesting little vignette, and the quote at the bottom makes it clear what you're going for. It needs a good bit of proofreading (you have present/past tense confusion in several areas, too many commas, and a few typos) but it's certainly legible. This is a solid effort with an interesting twist on the design.
I really hope there is a part two soon!
8999972
Thank you, but it's actually hard to find a proofreader, I'll try to improve on my own, I hope it wasn't hard to read.
9000484
You just found one. Let me know what you want me to proof.
9000491
Oh, well, if you're fine with it, I'd love if you could proofread this one shot
9000492
Sure, but I'd like a gdoc or raw to edit. Doing it via FIMFic comments is not exactly ideal for a variety of reasons. PM me.
Is this loss?
9003534
It is.