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Akwolfgrl13


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This could lead to something interesting. And I like the way you portrayed Sunset. I look forward to seeing where this goes. Maybe I can get some inspiration for writing from it as well, hehe. It seems likely. Keep it up!

So she done taking crap from everyone? Good. hope she puts some in traction before she leaves.

Decent start. Now, let's see where this one will take us, shall we?

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Thank u! I hope u get ur inspiration to write.

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Shes my fav. I thought what happened was wrong. Plus she seems to have anger issues. Witch i love.

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Hopefully far lol. My vacation is coming up so lots of wirteing time.

I'm liking the begining, please continue it.

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Wirteing chapter 2 during my lunch and breaks gotta do a bit of research of corse.

Loved it. Please continue:heart:

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Dont worry already 200 words in just gota do a touch of research.

since when did Sunset Shimmer ever take the easy way out?

Redeemed does not mean push over. If any of them try to hurt you, you break them.

Considering some of the Anon-a-miss stories on the site, specifically the suicide and self-harm ones (though nothing against them), this feels quite in line with how Sunset would really act toward this situation.

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Thank you! That's what I thought. (although I do enjoy those to) she stubborn and proud. Sure she had a moment of self dought but shes to stubborn to go that easily.

*Looks At Summary* Uh......What?

This is gonna be good. A strong, if familiar setup. Beautiful and reasonable characterization. And, good writing. I’m on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

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Thank you! Chapter 2 should be out spon hopefully a couple of days.

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Sorry didn't mean to confuse you. I didmt like what i had prior so i used that quote since it fits perfectly in my opinion.

Interesting.... You have my attention

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Thank you! I hope i can keep it the 2nd chapter is almost done. Hopefully up by monday or Tuesday depdeing on the wirteing gods and my best friend /editor.

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You're welcome & can't wait to see how chapter 2 turns out.

Nice start can't wait to see the rest of it

Nice, I don’t think I’ve seen an anon story where Sunset just tries to graduate as opposed to transfer. One thing though, sentient just means something has senses. Sapient is the word for having intellect.

I would've just sucker punched RD.

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Sorry got them mixed up. Ill fix that.
I figured that since she was so smart why npy. Plus its a nice change of pace.

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I did think about having a fight in the bathroom but desied agasit it.

“In order to rise from its own ashes a Phoenix must first burn” - Octavia E. Butler, parable of the talents

I can already tell; this is going to be a fun chapter. <-- sarcasm

Sunset felt her heart leap with excitement. A way out! College sounded wonderful, a real challenge. Sunset could only imagine how much she would learn and discover while there. Twilight would hopeful be excited for her.

Ooh! I've not seen this one before. Anon-A-Miss to college sounds interesting. I wonder what interesting conflicts will arise. I must say though, the SATs are wholly inferior to the ACTs. The SATs test what you know; the ACTs test how well you think, in theory anyway.


Argh! I need moar!
In all seriousness though, this is just getting better as it goes. I hope to see more soon, but don't burn yourself out. I'd hate to see this end up unfinished.

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Thank you so much. I thought college wound be more interesting than just transferring schools. Besides transferring schools would alram Twilight. Going to College sounds great espilly to twilight who loves to learn as well. I try to wirte a little each day. But i got vacation coming up so i might get more wirteing in.

Interesting, Sunset leaving by graduating instead of heading Crystal Prep. Lets see where we go from here.

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Thank you. As much as i enjoy her going to crystal prep i wanted something new.

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And something new you have done :twilightsmile:

i love sunset's no bull attitude its a nice change good job

i like this story it feels like how the actual sunset would react.
cant wait to see more! :D

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Thank you! Ive been think about it for awhile now.

Fingers crossed...:yay:

Well that's not bad at all, it's very good even. (not that I can judge on writing quality, I'm only decent in english)
I feel like you're trying to speed up the "aftermath" of Anon-A-Miss, a clean break with the school and then going forward.
I hope you do well, good luck for the rest. :pinkiehappy:

lol
nice
cant wait to see this continue
i REALLY want to see the fallout of anon a miss

You mispelled at the end of the chapter, or at least I think you did...
You wrote " She wasn't found....", to me it doesn't make any sense (she want to hide?), isn't it "fond" that suit the situation?

Ah the wonderful skill of lies by omission.

Nice chapter, nothing to special but worth the read.

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Next chapter will be more intense.

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Lpoks like my edtior\bestie didnt catch it ethior ill fix that

Please don't abandon it i like your take on the story.

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Not going to the next chapter is in editing right now just finished wirting it. My bestie/editor is working on it.

Will Sunset get some pay back before she leaves and after she leaves?

CSC

At least SOMEONE believes her.

I swear, it's always the Anon-A-Miss fics where Flash Sentry gets to have some character substance.

This is going to be a tragedy. I dunno but I'm going to wait til it's all finished before I continue.

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