Many adventurers have delved into the Everfree without taking the main route, and few return. Those who come back tell storys of vicious monsters, lethal plant life, or many came back purely from fear of the forest. However, one pony has came back with a most peculiar story. He tells of another pony in the forest, dressed in a formal black suit and tie. It, since it's next features describe it as such, has tendrils that extend indefinitely. It's face, if one calls it that, features no eyes or mouth, and does not possess the mane. In order to investigate this phenomenon, Clear Dawn and Maneshot decide to uncover the truth of this mysterious stallion, and his plans...
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"Look, we got to get him to Doctor Whooves, he will..."
DON'T YOU DARE TO MAKE DOCTOR WHOOVES A MEDICAL DOCTOR! He's a time traveller...and not a nurse....
A slendermane fic?!
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love it!
Oh sweet Celestia! I hate you for this.
But you still get my like.
Shit just got real
MOAR!!!!!!
Is this based on the game where you find a gun and have to kill them all?
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The only think that this is based off a few things from TribeTwelve and Marble Hornets, just with my own way of writing it.
Has lots of potential
i personally like the POV of slendermane/slender stallion
but ya know Ill just have my way :D
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Great job so far, man!
Personally, I wouldn't have mentioned the tentacles, just because they bother me. BUT! Other than that, great OCs, good plot, and it isn't rushed! You cannot believe how many Slendermane stories were rushed to the point that if you skipped one word, you would lose the plot line.
Great job, keep up the good work.
I am impressed. Have a moustache.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
All the foals try to run.
Slender Stallion, SlenderStallion
To him it's part of the fun.
SlenderStallion, SlenderStallion,
Dressed in darkest suit and tie.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
You most certainly will die.
Slender Stallion,Slender Stallion,
His branching forelegs are for collecting.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
His face is empty of expressing.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
He won't let you say goodbye.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
You most certainly will die.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
Sometimes hums a lowly drone.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
He will wander 'round your home.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
Blends in well within the trees.
Slender Stallion, SlenderStallion,
In the fog he's hard to see.
Slender Stallion, Slender Stallion,
Dressed in darkest suit and tie.
Slender Stallion, SlenderStallion,
You most certainly will die.
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You sir deserve a medal for revamping the lyrics.
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The Knight?
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SEEMS LEGIT, AMIRIGHT?
can't wait to read this
MOAR TO TRACK... TRACK EVERY SINGLE GOOD STORY! like.... 14 slendy stories to read now.
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Erm...
Not sure to feel gratified or unoriginal...
Aw, crap.
Is that Slender Sickness I see?
I like Slenderman horror, but I can't really grasp the horror of these two's situation. The read itself doesn't provoke feelings of terror.
Actaully the Knight who fought slenderman was called Der Ritter, as was the woodcarving it was based on. Slendy himself is called Der Großmann.
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Prepare your body...
...paradox.
And also, it is difficult to implement what is usually proposed in video footage into a literary format.
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Christ man...
I come back from a internet black-out and THIS is what happens?
...great, this story has a bit of mental instability with readers...
I like this if you want to learn more about slenderman check out the slender man wiki if you dare
Hmm slender mane what are you up to
get ready set goooooo
Go run get to the chopper the chopper is celestia
oh its about to get real ohhhhhh
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I suppose it is necessary to comment 5 times in a row...
NOT TWILY! DONT HURT TWILY!
(Says the grimdark writer. What am i doing with my life?)
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Ah don't say too much. We don't even know what happens yet. Hell, I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT.
...what does that say about me?
You do realise that Der Ritter is German for tall MAN(still like the story can't wait for more).
Somebody call Hitsune Miku!
Well... dead...
Let the hunger games begin!
Gore?
Evil smile
Gore?
Evil smile