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Gina is a demigryh, a tribe of wingless griffon, working for Diamond Heat the owner of the biggest manufacturer of adult goods in The Crystal Empire, and all seems to be going fine for her. Until her boss sends her out on a mission to get a mold of The Crystal Empire number one bachelor Spike The Dragon so they can flood the market with dragon dildos.
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Maybe it possible that Lord ember might want to get with spike too?? Could be interesting/funny to see how the girls fight over spike from a strong dragoness
Since Prince Spike is considered as her 'younger brother', is it safe to assume that Cadence is like a daughter to Celestia as opposed to her niece? Or does that still work, and it's implied that Sunset Shimmer could be considered as Celestia's daughter in the same way that she and Discord call Spike their prince and their son?
...BTW, I love CelesiCord/DisLestia, especially where it's implying that Spike is the result of one of their countless trysts....Come to think of it, it works so well that it's a surprised that they didn't officially make it canon that Discord and Celestia could (or maybe still do....hehehe) had a bit of a relationship in the past. That's just me though.
Also, it seems to me that I'm assuming that English is not your native tongue, but you doing fine. To really polish this though and make it shine, it needs an editor, or at least another set of eyes to go over with. The story is basic, you've got the plot and reason for it, but there needs to bit of depth in my opinion. For example, we get that Gina wants to get a model of Spike genetalia for her boss, but it's harder than just going to Spike and saying "we need a model of your penis to make adult toys of you". In fact, there are probably seven reasons it's not gonna be that easy--eight if you include Princess Cadence. But there has to be more than just that. What if Gina starts to have feeling for Spike other than just a celebrity or a prince? Make it worthwhile to come back and be looking for it. I'm sure that you will have more for it as it turns out,.
Now, THIS is new. I haven't seem much, if ANY, of the Mane 6 or Spike in Rainbow Power colors, but right there, you have described Rarity with her mane, that seems to be her Rainbow Mane , like this:
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If that is the case, I really hope that the rest of the mare are in there Rainbow Power manes as well!! Also, since Spike has the wings now, I think it would be pretty cool to see him as Rainbow-fied as well...
Just an opinion...
Anthro means that the animals have human characteristics, like a female only has one pair of breasts and they are on the upper torso of the body--which explains why bras are there. Gina is not supposed to have three pairs of breasts.
I honestly think you may have forgotten that this is an Anthro story. You need to look at that again...
You need a proof reader and editor to help with the text, that’s the main issue.
Gina....I know you are trying to do your job/assignment, and you are aware that Spike's a very hot commodity---any puns not intended.
However, I have an idea....WHY DON'T YOU ACTUALLY ASK HIM??!!!?! I have a feeling that by the time this story make to it's conclusion, we are gonna discover that Spike is willing to agree to Gina's request to make a model of his 'equipment'...
Also, I'm starting to think that the whole 'the Mane 6 and Cadence are really protective' bit may be a bit exaggerated.
Off topic, does everyone on here have their clothing based on Rainbow Power or no, because near the beginning, it really seem that you were describing Spike's main mares--The Mane 6--as anthroptized as well as have Rainbow Power colors and manes (Personally I wish there should be more stories that have the Rainbow Power addressed, but that's just me)... But now it seems you are describing them as regular characters. So which is it?? If you are not familiar with it, by all means go to Derpibooru and type in "Rainbow Power", and you will see what I'm referring to.
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Only the mane six has the rainbow power manes
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First, wow, you responded quickly!! Secondly, thanks for confirming that, I was going through the previous chapters and it did confirm they are all rainbowfied, I just had to get a quick reminder of what they look like in Rainbow Power mode. You got the descriptions well..
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Probably a good idea to reread these after they release, my editor seems to only be able to get to them after they been publish
Spikes gonna give Gina the mold, isn't he? For a price though...Gina goons be spike's first if spike hasn't smashed already...
EDIT: I honestly think that is gonna be the case where Spike helps Gina. Either that, or Spike's gonna go off on the Mane 6 for being so 'protective' for Spike. (edited as of 11/6/2018 10.00 AM EST). I think that Spike is surprisingly gonna go easy on Gina because that is his nature--and proven (in his mind anyway) how ironically unfriendly his friends can be to others when it comes to love/lust, and in his own way, Spike going all the way with Gina could be his way of teaching the girls a bit of a lesson.
Of course, there is still gonna be the point where Cadence find out what has been occurring, but I'm more interested in seeing how Princess Celestia and Lord Discord (Spike's parents, for all of you that were tracking) react to this. I could see them being a bit trollish and actually join Spike in an exclusive Royal collection set--adult toys based on Celestia, Discord, and Spike together. I bet that could be a HUGE moneymaking hit for Gina--even enough to possible start her own buisness perhaps??
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I actually have the last chapter don, I'm just waiting to hear back from the editor on it
This was great and really funny, I really hope you do a follow up to this one day.
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Well do have an idea for one but it doesn't involve Spike. Unless you count others talking about him
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I would honestly like to see another involving him again but just talking about him would be interesting. I think I could see a follow up where our noisy friend here, after it gets out that Spike has his own herd and they are married, that her boss want her to now go and document Spike with each of his herd mates so they can put out porn of him. Either by taping or writing it down for erotic novels lol. It would be funny to see his herd who we know how and how it might have grown, like the CMC, his Flurry, and even some of his old students from the Young 6 lol. I could see a few of his core herd already being with child by this point lol.
Anyway it was a idea that just came to mind and I would love to see more in this world soon.
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That's a really good idea!! It would be interesting to see how creatures like Smoulder and Flurry Heart in particular would react...
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Yea I mean I can see Flurry's mom totally pushing her to be with Spike or at least happy to have her with him knowing she couldn't find a better partner. And the C.Ponies would love that their newest princess even tho she is just a teen could become herdmates to their hero lol. I can so see Smolder, the changling, and the Yak being with Spike. It being a thing of some female students falling for their professor lol. It would just be a trip that they think the got it bad with the toys of Spike they mad just think how that protective big sis would be when they TRY to publish porn of Spike some of it including her own daughter. Their company would be magically nuked from the sky lol.
Well Gina you're about to find out aren't you.
Go get your dick Gina.
Damn Dash is flat everywhere.
Nice spell.
No it's not Pinkie but it is huge.
Okay Gina Stop using that spell, cause you keep missing.
Of course Fluttershy is the dirty one.
Well you bout to die today.
XD XD XD XD... ahora sabes por que es el soltero mas codiciado de equestria XD XD... algunas de sus amigas no intentaron "adueñarse" de el??... es enserio que spike es hijo biológico de discord y celestia??
XD XD XD XD... now you know why he is the most coveted bachelor in equestria XD XD... some of his friends didn't try to "own" him??... is it true that spike is the biological son of discord and celestia ??
as they say in Latin América "te la rifaron" XD XD XD
... three??...
entonces a pinkie le pasa muy a seguido??
so it happens to pinkie very often??
si, se lo merecía... solo para poder aclarar, los ponis son anthro, pero no tiene manos??... esa foto le aumentara su reputación XD... según por mi experiencia leyendo comics y fanfics solo a las hembras le afecta los celos...
yes, he deserved it... just to clarify, the ponies are anthro, but he doesn't have hands??... that photo will increase his reputation XD... according to my experience reading comics and fanfics only females like him affects jealousy...