1013409 Dash is doing her best with a really tough situation.
1013578 Thank you. I've done some research, and I'm glad it shows. Just as long as it doesn't sound sounding like a textbook or a Lifetime Movie.
1014237 I know, AJ beating herself is hard, but it's a pretty typical reaction to this kind of thing. Like Dash said, it messed her up more than she realizes. Hopefully with the help of her friends she'll be able to get her life back to normal.
I think Fimfiction is acting up too much to try going for featured (if you were going for it, I still don't know exactly how it works) My dearest companion, I require moar of this substance you call writing.
1041853 - "Now, now, we shouldn't talk about ruffians like Felixdawn around a tale as magnificent as yours." - "I for one, simply adore how you handle the subject, as much of a drama king I can be."
Protective Dash is so cute! Hmm, I wonder if the princess will be sending Uncle Orange to the moon or the sun? That is if Rainbow doesn't disembowel him first.
I'm not moving from this seat until this gets updated again. Who needs food, water, and sleep anyway?
This is so fitting for Dash. Protective to the end... but she's being overprotective. Which is so like her. I can see how this could lead to conflict with AJ, but she understands it so it won't be a huge fight.
ufh I already read all the trhee chapters, I gonna comment about the whole story so far here XD simply: this is very Intersting! the theme of....rape.. is something I only had read in other great story by BronyNeumo (you know him? he is a Super Awsome AppleDash writter in Deviant Art!) it have a lot feelings....and is very...mmm how to say it....real? XD....about real problems whit rape in real life..... and the dreams that Applejack have, talking whit discord, those are an awesome additon! and are sad XD. this story of you is awesome Bookplayer! I totally want to see more! XD, lol you make a lot of stories!, you already started other! XD I gonna follow all your AppleDash stories for sure!
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Dash is doing her best with a really tough situation.
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Thank you. I've done some research, and I'm glad it shows. Just as long as it doesn't sound sounding like a textbook or a Lifetime Movie.
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I know, AJ beating herself is hard, but it's a pretty typical reaction to this kind of thing. Like Dash said, it messed her up more than she realizes. Hopefully with the help of her friends she'll be able to get her life back to normal.
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Thanks!
I think Fimfiction is acting up too much to try going for featured (if you were going for it, I still don't know exactly how it works)
My dearest companion, I require moar of this substance you call writing.
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I doubt I'll get featured anyway, with this one. It's "mature" and not a subject a lot of people go for.
I have a better shot than our buddy FelixDawn who updated right before me, though.
I agree with Rarity and Dash. Destroyed is a good option.
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- "Now, now, we shouldn't talk about ruffians like Felixdawn around a tale as magnificent as yours."
- "I for one, simply adore how you handle the subject, as much of a drama king I can be."
Are these chapters getting longer?
I'd be reading this right now if I didn't have to go buy and make dinner.
well; damn; this fic continues to impress and amaze me.
Protective Dash is so cute!
Hmm, I wonder if the princess will be sending Uncle Orange to the moon or the sun? That is if Rainbow doesn't disembowel him first.
I'm not moving from this seat until this gets updated again. Who needs food, water, and sleep anyway?
1041853 Well it should get featured, because this is a really good story. So good, that I give it 11 moustaches out of 10
I'm really loving this first person Applejack narrative. It's seldom seen and you're doing a great job with it.
This is so fitting for Dash. Protective to the end... but she's being overprotective. Which is so like her. I can see how this could lead to conflict with AJ, but she understands it so it won't be a huge fight.
...Right?
MOAR
Hmm, seems like this fic has handled the sensitive topic really well. I'm glad this didn't turn into narm.
I don't know how to feel about this fic I am enjoying it but sad that it is unfinished. no rush just hoping for the best with AJ
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I'm actually working on this fic tonight. I can't make any promises for when it'll get posted, but it's not abandoned, I promise.
1346189Like I said, no rush
ufh I already read all the trhee chapters, I gonna comment about the whole story so far here XD
simply: this is very Intersting! the theme of....rape.. is something I only had read in other great story by BronyNeumo (you know him? he is a Super Awsome AppleDash writter in Deviant Art!)
it have a lot feelings....and is very...mmm how to say it....real? XD....about real problems whit rape in real life.....
and the dreams that Applejack have, talking whit discord, those are an awesome additon! and are sad XD.
this story of you is awesome Bookplayer! I totally want to see more!
XD, lol you make a lot of stories!, you already started other! XD
I gonna follow all your AppleDash stories for sure!
Ever heard of or played portal? I swear pinkie pie has a mini portal gun