Feel bad for sunset, can understand why the others can be suspicious, but that comic still rubbed me all sorts of the wrong way with how cruel it was and how easily her friends just gave up
“Dear Celestia,” Sunset thought, “even the Dazzlings didn’t get this much shit when they came back to school.” Sunset struggled to get up without furthering the damage done to her clothing.
Alright, establishing that the Dazzlings still go to Canterlot High? That's good to do early.
It may seem obvious, but you'd be surprised how many writers fall into the trap of forgetting to establish things before they're important — even me on occasion.
Who will the sex be between?
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Trixie and Sunset; the tag is mostly there for innuendo and implication, but I am considering writing the sex scene itself as a bonus chapter.
Damn i was hoping for a Dazzlings foursome, but Trixie is okay too.
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Don't worry, I'm saving that for my next fic ;)
Feel bad for sunset, can understand why the others can be suspicious, but that comic still rubbed me all sorts of the wrong way with how cruel it was and how easily her friends just gave up
Ouch
Sunny's in a real bad place huh?
Alright, establishing that the Dazzlings still go to Canterlot High? That's good to do early.
It may seem obvious, but you'd be surprised how many writers fall into the trap of forgetting to establish things before they're important — even me on occasion.
Sometimes you just need to choose violence. They might not respect you, but they'll know better to mess with you.
*hugs you close* I hope you are doing better.
Ha! My first "Anon-a-Miss" fanfic! Yeah... time when this shit didn't seem so stupid.