(Humanized) Her DJ career is on the deadlock, Vincenza 'Vinyl' Scratch needs an other job quickly. Thanks to her mother's connection, she founds one in a complete other field than what she's used to: Highschool Teaching!
Before two worlds became one; before one home was made their own; they still had so many possibilities. It was their differences that led them here and kept them together.
A humanized OctaScratch romantic comedy in which Octavia tries to pay the bills by offering music lessons to those who are willing to learn how to play instruments. Vinyl Scratch just so happens to be one of her students.
It's a bit short and rushed, not to mention i don't think that even a girl like vinyl would kiss someone with only a few words (If that was the case, the earth would be way more overpopulated than it is right now.)
you should add a bit more detail into everything, and you never said this was a HiE story. (The part where it said "You're human." at the top of the chapter.)
Play this right, and this will hit the featured box (It can get that good with a more-solid foundation and a great plot.)
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Hope you like it so far!
*sees thumbs section*
"its.......empty.*.........
"I HAVE THE POWER!!!!"
clicks thumbs up.
as a side note, this could be something very beautiful if you play your cards right.
not saying that its not a good story though.
(which it is)
FOIST
[RANDOM FILLER]
"FOOTBALL!"
*hits jockey on top of elis*
"YEAHA!"
y u no post more?
I was at the South Australian version of ComiCon :p
and don't expect any responses tomorrow, I'll be at a race. Thanks for liking it though!
It's a bit short and rushed, not to mention i don't think that even a girl like vinyl would kiss someone with only a few words (If that was the case, the earth would be way more overpopulated than it is right now.)
you should add a bit more detail into everything, and you never said this was a HiE story. (The part where it said "You're human." at the top of the chapter.)
Play this right, and this will hit the featured box (It can get that good with a more-solid foundation and a great plot.)
Anyways, great job!
I agree, but for about 40 minutes of writing a chapter while I'm on the train I'd say it's pretty damn good :p
I have no idea what HiE is
thanks!
lol wut
lol Its so weird
but good
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this makes me want to continue the story :I
But I don't know where I'm going with it!
SHIT I MADE SPELLING ERRORS
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