• Member Since 3rd Jun, 2014
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Odlaw


Hi, I write primarily fetish erotica. If you like those things, especially the some of the taboo stuff, you've come to the right place!

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Typo:

that girl has another thing coming

"think" (this idiom is about thinking as in "think again")

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Ah, thank you for letting me know. Will fix it now.

Hey man, I know how you feel when it comes to many dislikes for your work. Join the club. Feel free to check out my work, of course, if you want to.

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I will definitely have a look.

Fantastic work as always!

I read 'farting' then added it to read later favourites

Wasnt a fan of the blackmail/force but I did enjoy the smearing I just wish Rarity chosen to do it on her own instead of having someone blackmail her

This was quite good. Better then what I attempted to do. Great work!

Not bad, wosh you got the, either dirtier, or more intimate (well not intimate, but sexual)

You better not just let her get away with it!
You better make a sequel were Rarity gets some revenge.
Also who is him? Big Mac?

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Im may do a sequel chapter to this at some point. Also, as to who, note the 'implied bestiality' tag.

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Wow you think you know a girl!

I like the part where Sunset farts on Rarity (thanks for leaving her panties on) and soils herself

now that i know the kind of story's you write, the title alone of this one gave me a shudder through my whole body xD

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Glad you enjoyed it!

I want to see a 'Bad Ending' to this, where Rarity's 'poop makeup tutorial' is released and her reputation's ruined, and Sunset holds this over her head in order to make Rarity her slave.

Can I write a sequel to this?

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I was originally planning on doing so back when this was first written, but that plan had kinda fallen to the wayside since. I have no problem with you picking it up from here if you want to.

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Thanks:pinkiehappy: it'll be awhile before I start it still got other stories to finish

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