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Ugh. Babe.
Oh yeah, that's exactly how canon Rarity would mentally respond. I'm glad you understand how these characters function.
On another note, the presence of an abusive relationship is obvious. This is a difficult topic to write about because oftentimes authors make the abuser seem like a mustache twirling villain. I hope that you're leaning towards something more realistic and gradual.
Anyway, flawless chapter. See you next week.
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I appreciate the kind feedback!! I pride myself on good characterization, so it means a whole lot
Unfortunately, I've had enough personal experience with emotionally manipulative and abusive relationships that Nightwhisper's character should be firmly founded in reality. He hasn't really had his chance in the spotlight yet... But I don't think you'll be disappointed!!
True.
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They're good gals!! I make myself misty sometimes
I feel like this is all somehow a metaphor or an 'emotional journey', and Rainbow is actually dead or something. Not sure. All I am sure of is that I'm enjoying the crap out of it. Keep it up.
All of your story tags give me a real sinking feeling about how all this is going to play out. I don't know if my feels are ready for the abuse....
The sheer amount of sandwich racism in here is fuckin' killing me.