The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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And the sun shall burn the ground and all will be Ash and glass And her light show rain Fire from the heavens
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Praise the sun
I'm a little bit dissapointed that the human more or less again ends up as the damsel in distress.
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This is a Rgre
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what does that mean?
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Reverse gender role equestria It basically means the females are the dominant species the males are submissive treats that are usually for men are for the mares and males act like girls
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And a lot of stories the females want to protect and save and be heroic to impress males
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ahh okay thank you.
Well I don't really like that, I honestly don't like it no matter which gender tried to appear as the superior one.
It could have to do with the fact that even if males from different species appear in Equestria they aren't able to think as far as that it's maybe different for them.
Maybe the author usually tries to show it, but they never quite manage to do that as far as I remember it.
I prefer it if they try to avoid making a big deal out of it because of that.
edit: I needed to remember myself and took a look at what I had written again because I thought this was an older story for a moment.
I maybe prefer it if the main char is no useless idiot because of some stories I had seen so far.
I don't mean that the main char is that bad but I just talk like that for now.
I forgot what I wanted to add, to tired.
edit: ahhh yes, not sure if it was a reason when I had written the first comment, but no matter what they can do or what they have with them, the humans always manage to get in that certain situation. I know we image that world this and that way, but since everything is only a theory, it could also affect the human completely differently.
I give the short version, since some said cartoon characters can be barely hurt and whatever, I say that the cartoon world could be less harmfull to the human even if only to a level, that would make him as durable as the ponies.
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The reason some poeple go with the rgre is To explain why majority of the ponies in the background or most episodes are female
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In my opinion humans are weak creatures that can only defend themselves with their mind. Joseph is weak and without his inventions he would not stand a chance against lets say a Gryphon.
But let's wait and see how Joseph copes with this little excursion to the Gryphon Empire. ^.^
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I guess it depens on the opinion and like I said, that world is mostly theory.
However then I will just see it the way, that you had written a story with weak humans
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Well, Joseph is not a really strong man. I think of him as a young adult who was a student in most of his life. Average body, not weak by any means, but not really muscular or well-trained in combat.
He uses his 'little' inventions instead of raw muscle :P
I can see it now:
GryphANUS:"You will build my army weapons!"
Troll:"...sure."
*builds nerve gas in faulty containment units*
Gryphanal: "My army!"
Troll: "PFFT, NOOB!"
Also, Celestia did not try hard AT ALL. Anything from telekinesis to skipping the countdown would have been fine. Oh, and the guy sucks at sneaking a gun up. I mean, he only had to hold it and keep it under his sheets then POW POW and he'd have been fine.
This... This was ridiculous I don't know how you even had the courage to post this shit