The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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This chapter is funny again, for some reason the first and the fourth where my favourites chapters till now.
this sounds liike a weird comedy/romance Celestia X Joseph story would happen and I like it that there is a chance that it won't look like celestia is in control of everything again.
I said something similar already I think, but I like it that she isn't without flaws here and that Joseph is somehow capable too.
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Glad to hear you like it ❤
A story with a human that actually acts like he could exist in real life?
Holy hell, sign me up.
And a bit of rgre is always fun.
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Implying building a nuke to repress depression is "acting normal" :D but hey why not right?
Glad you enjoy it, Cheers!
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Actually....that is kinda normal. It's something solid uniquely "human" in ponyland. We like sheer power for safety, and nukes are deeply embedded in the human social conscious.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thou I really recommend you give this a read. I don't have the time to correct every mistake you make with Luna, but it might be good to familiarize yourself with the use of middle english.
Also what I don't understand is why Luna is so sceptical. It was heavily implied in chapter one that he had already supplied weaponry during the whole changeling thing.
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thanks, I definitely have not much knowledge of the old English. Will give it a read.
He has indeed delivered them weaponry. But keep in mind his demands for that could have been a bit outrageous.