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Whooves235


Hello, my name's Whooves! I'm just your average brony. I'm a major Appledash shipper/writer, and I like to make stories and other content.

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This story is a sequel to Clash of the Bolts: Battle for the Skies


It has been eleven years since The Shadowbolt Battle in the Crystal Empire and Equestria has seen peace. Applejack and Rainbow Dash are happily married with a young Colt named Zap Apple, Fluttershy and Discord are dating and some Romance Between Twilight and Pinkie Pie is going on nothing could be better, Except for the fact that Princess Cinch is back and has backup with her but not just any back up, she has teamed up with Tirek, Now the Main 6 with the help of Sunset Shimmer must defeat Tirek and stop Princess Cinch from Taking over Equestria before it is too late.


Contains: Appledash, Fluttercord, and Twinkie

I would also like to thank my Proofreader 0_0

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 25 )

Is Rarity set up with anyone? Or is she not shipped here?

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she is not set up with ennyone but if you can think of someone i will be glad to add it

Oh my god. The grammar is absolutely killing me. I love the story line, but the grammar man. Have you thought about getting a proof reader?

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ya I dont know a lot of people who can help me with that if you have any suggestions please say

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Wow This is a great story.........
I'm speechless

"Yeah, second to you," Zap said with a sassy tone. It was true that ever since Spitfire retired to hunt down Princess Cinch, she had filled the role as Commander and Leader of the Wonderbolts nicely. Evan tho she and Spitfire are the only original Wonderbolts left, she is still proud to fill in the role of a grate Wonderbolt like Spitfire

Evan tho you steory is gud yo spelllng is bed liek I am tyeping.
If you didn't understand that⬆️ all I'm saying is it's "even though" and "great" not "Evan tho" and grate.
This is interesting, while I don't like Fluttercord or AppleDash ill read.

You have lots of spelling mistakes and a lot of stuff feels a bit like filler, but maybe I'm wrong. I'll keep reading.

"If you want to get something from someone and you know where it is, how would you get it?" Twilight said.

Fluttershy said, "you ask politely for it?"

"You get all of them away from the location," Twilight said, "and destroy the location until you find what you are looking for."

This sentence makes it seem like Twi actually does do that to get something. :twilightoops:

This is pretty good so far, I'll keep going.

"I need to see what happened to the Castle," Twilight said. "Then I need to find Spike and Starlight." Then under her breath she said angrily, "if they are dead, so help me, Celestia, I will kill Triek with my own two hooves."

This reminds me of Round Trips "In a Nutshell" series where the mane 6 couldn't say Tireks' name properly.

"We lost 20," Dr. Whooves said, "Bon-Bon, Berryshine, Vinyl, Lucky Clover, Rising Star,...Rose, just to name a few."

GASPUS, BONBON NOOOOOOO :raritydespair:

"Thank you all," Twilight said. "This is a dark time in Equestrian History. It's nice to know we have ponies like you to fight off the evil that threatens this land. In my opinion, you are all heroes." Then after addressing the crowd, she turned around to face the mane 7.

Mane...7? Is this including Sunset and Twi or did one of the Pinkie clones return? :pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp:

And the people they have Captured/Teamed up[...]

In place of the slash mark write "or" because nobody speaks in text or uses the word slash while speaking.

First of all it's "many" not "menny", if you have spelling mistakes in the literal title then no body will read the story

"When I get my hands on that mother****** I’m gonna buck her in the ****** stomach until she bleeds from her ***," Fluttershy said angrily.

Oh :rainbowderp:
Also she has no hands.
Also time two let me finish + fix dat sentence :ajsmug:
"When I get my hooves on that motherfucker I'm gonna buck her in the fuckin' stomach until she bleeds from her ass."

"We Have To Go Find Her Right Now," Twilight said.

Why are the first letters all capitalised like this is the title?

The sky was dark gray, and all of Tartarus was breaking loose. Twilight and Fluttershy were battling Discord and Tirek, Pinkie out of all ponies was dealing with Flam, and Rarity… Was gone. This was truly a dark day for Equestria.

No...doing that...I just started reading and you...wow man, you got guts. Its a shame though, Rares never did get much attention in this fic. :raritycry:

"AGH!" Cadence shouted, and slowly she dropped her weapon, falling towards the ground. The Princess of Love was dead.

OH GOD DAYUM, was not expecting that so soon! The death tag isn't for nothing!

"Hahaha!" Rainbow and Applejack laughed while pointing at the fallen and bleeding Rarity.

Detect more Rarity abuse, even though she's not the real Rarity just the one in the mirror of truth but still.

Soooooo...this is basically chapter 9 but remade?

"Because," Chrysalis said, "you were right, *Caugh *Caugh, I should have taken your hand when I had the chance."

cAuGh

Also again, hand?

"No one touches my Spiky Wiky," Rarity whispered through gritted teeth.

GASPUS, RARITY??!! *screams in excited fangirl*

Dis is getting gud (and no, I am not saying that just cuz Rarity is back)

Oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sssshhhhhhnnnnnaaaaaapppppppp the getting going is getting good.

Happy ending!
Also "Trek..." really Rarity?

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Hay! Thank you so much for reading this story, I honestly didn't think anyone would find it after all these years. I wrote this story when I was in High School :rainbowlaugh: The spelling errors and everything really do pop up don't they?

Im very happy and glad you ended up reading this. If you'd like to check out more stories, this fic does have a prequel fic, a side story sequel, a side story prequel to the first prequel, and a sequel (which is currently on hiatus). And you can also check out some of my other stories as well.

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