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TooShyShy


Fan fiction. The final frontier.

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Based on a story idea someone suggested

Queen Novo banishes Twilight and her friends to the deepest reaches of the ocean. In this dark and desolate place of water and silence, giving in to one's animal instincts seems like the obvious course of action.

Thus Spike awakens, trapped and alone in an unfamiliar place. But as he quickly learns, it's a lot worse than that.

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Why did Queen Novo banish Spike and the Main 6?

Surely everything went water-under-the-bridge after the events of the movie.

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Whoops. Forgot to tag this as "Alternate Universe". Basically the story is meant to be an alternate version of events that could have happened.

I hope Celestia gets free and cooks Novo alive:twilightangry2:... heck, Tempest and the Storm King may do it themselves, she did just steal their chance at getting the last of the alicorn magic from them:trixieshiftright:

What was Twilight? my guess is a gulper eel factzoo.com/sites/all/img/fish/rayfins/gulper-eel.jpg
I even found this orig00.deviantart.net/a913/f/2017/224/6/6/gulper_eel_mermaid_by_luciddreams18-dbjsd8s.png just add some horse features and you got her.

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I was going for a Black Swallower. Having done a little research, I now realize why so many people are terrified of the ocean.

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Wow, that's even more terrifying I think I could have ever imagined, good work I usually hate this type of story but you earned a like. Though I have to warn you if you keep up this “swallowing” thing you’ll end up in a really weird part of the internet.pbs.twimg.com/media/CpW0oFdXgAA9wUV.jpg
Follow up question were they all normal fish or merponies because of a giant version of the black swallower would be even more terrifying.

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It's up to interpretation, but I personally imagined them as normal fishes.

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That's probably for the best it would make more sense as to why they lost their minds so fast and a giant version of that fish would be terrifying I mean killer whales could be swallowed whole if it was resized to a pony.

Goffee #10 · Jul 25th, 2019 · · 13 ·

Nice vore clopfic. I fapped 8/10

Now I kinda wanna see queen novo watch as her daughter is ripped in half right in front of her by an angry ningen

Sweet vore-fic, that was morbid! :twilightoops:
This is like the fourth time I got a nightmare from reading a FIMFiction. :fluttershyouch:
I dunno if I should put this in my "Fave Spike-fics" folder or not.

How was Spike seeing them from in there? Was she transparent?

It's crazy how this was the first fanfic I saw when I found this site:pinkiegasp:
Like the story! Very dark.

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Jesus you're a youngblood. Look up Past Sins when you get a chance.

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I have some notion of how that might go.


A mysterious scaled equine... creature with a smooth opalescent stone in its barrel fixed a deadpan stare on Novo, who watched in horror.

"You really should have thrown them back to the shore," he said with a mouth full of sharp teeth. "Now there's a chance they'll start coming after your people."

"I didn't think they'd go so feral!," Novo rebuffed.

"That's your problem now, regrettably," the mysterious creature said. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a broken-horned unicorn to detain, a staff to steal, a message to rehearse about why Celestia's star student isn't going to be coming back to her, and a whole co-species educational system to devise without the assistance of our Princess of Friendship. Good day to you, Queen Novo."

Then the mysterious sea creature swam off, leaving Novo to watch as Twilight ripped apart her former friends.

I don't know how I feel about this story, I hate it, it's sad, it's dark, it's disturbing to even read it.

You can argue and say that it's my fault for going to the story, although I didn't expect it to be this dark, I came here from an audio video, I wasn't aware that any of this was going to happen.

I would like to know how people even enjoy reading this.

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