Commas, mother fucker! Do you use them?!

I chuckled lightly “your adorable Luna” she started to blush after hearing that. “Hey Luna the foods going to take a while to finish, how about I sing a little bit for you.”

It's "You're adorable, Luna."

Not."Your adorable Luna"

But the Chapter was nice with that small bit of story building.

What did she mean by harder than she thought?

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From what my sisters have told me each one of them have thought of what the guy looks like underneath his clothes so it kind of use that logic from them

Um when is the next chapter coming out?

I’m Curious what about Amy? Did she come as well

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That was a sweet and funny chapter.

“Well I used to be until I became nightmare moon. And now I can eat meat see.” She then showed me her teeth which had to two little sharp teeth a little like a vampire's. “Your not mad are you?”

“Why would I be I eat meat too.” She looked surprise when I showed my much bigger and sharper teeth. “So what kinda do you want? And if you're looking for an exotic flavor hydra meat sweet yet spicy.”

"Mine's bigger."
"No, mine's bigger."