Another story written in the same vain as Don’t get Cocky and it doesn’t seem like it will actually hurt to read! I think this is the second story I’ve read where the main character unintentionally gets themselves displaced with a bunch of different powers and it’s actually pretty light on the number of powers. This might actually not make me hate it a few chapters in.
Why does this remind me of something?
The story isn't too bad. I recommend that you run it through a online grammar checker and that should fix some of the phrasing issues.
He has an Editor now :D
Ilove it so far ,but Ihope Amy's is coming with him .Second how are there night trops before Luna's return?
Dude, the random breaks in the paragraphs is actually making my eyes ache.
Okay, do you even realize how much 40K is in bills? There's no conceivable way you can put that much money in just your hand.
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Yeah. Wad of cash my plot.
Another story written in the same vain as Don’t get Cocky and it doesn’t seem like it will actually hurt to read! I think this is the second story I’ve read where the main character unintentionally gets themselves displaced with a bunch of different powers and it’s actually pretty light on the number of powers. This might actually not make me hate it a few chapters in.
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With enough power you can do anything. This is the power of the dark side!
*chokes someone five feet away from me.*