As day broke over Canterlot, there was one unicorn whose morning was not as cheerful and relaxing as the rest. On the upper floors of a book-filled tower, a frazzled Twilight Sparkle paced back and forth across the floor, lost in thought. Something was wrong. Something was very, very wrong.
"Good morning, Twilight." Spike yawned as he entered the room, rubbing the sleep from his eyes when he finally noticed Twilight's appearance. Twilight wasn't looking very good. In the mere hour or so that Twilight had been up, her mane and tail had grown unkempt and her right eye, bloodshot, kept twitching every so often. "Is... is everything okay?"
Twilight's ears swiveled towards the dragon moments before her head snapped to attention. "SPIKE!" She was in his face before he could even blink. "Of course everything isn't okay! How could you say that? Haven't you noticed?"
Spike stared back at her incredulously. "You... learned to teleport?"
"Augh! No!" Twilight grabbed Spike between her hooves and shook him. "Our wings! Our home! Everything just... reset!"
Spike began to get worried. Had Twilight completely lost it? "We... don't have any wings."
"Exactly! Don't you find that weird!?"
"Twilight... we've never had wings." Spike backed up a few steps. "Are... are you okay?"
Twilight stared at her assistant blankly for a few moments before tears started to form in her eyes. "B-but... the castle! The school! Our wings! Our friends! You have to remember... you can't have just... I can't be the only one who remembers..." Her voice was as shaky as her legs were wobbly. She looked like she was ready to collapse on the spot.
Spike took a few steps towards her with a worried expression. "T-Twilight? Please, d-don't scare me like this. Why are you saying all this stuff? I don't..." Before Spike could finish, Twilight rushed past Spike and down the stairs. "Twilight, wait!" Spike could hear the door slam as his big sister ran out into the streets of Canterlot. Seconds felt like hours as Spike tried to absorb and comprehend what had just happened. After what felt like an eternity, he turned and walked over to Twilight's fresh stack of blank parchment, taking an inked quill in-claw. Celestia would need to know that Twilight had lost it.
Twilight walked briskly through the streets of Canterlot, walking past hundreds of ponies going about their daily business. In her catatonic state, she barely even noticed the outside world. What could this all mean? Why had things reset like this? It had been... six, maybe seven years since she had lived here in Canterlot as a unicorn? Twilight didn't understand...
With a thump and a tumble, Twilight ran right into somepony. "Who? What? Huh?" Looking around, she saw Lemon Hearts helping Twinkle Shine off the ground, as Minuette held her hoof out to Twilight. "Minuette...?"
"Wow, you must have hit your head pretty hard if you're having trouble remembering me." Minuette giggled as she pulled Twilight off the ground. "You okay? I mean, you've been really oblivious to the world around you before, but you usually never run into ponies like that!"
"I... n-no, I'm fine." Twilight dusted herself off.
"That's good." Minuette smiled. "Oh, before I forget, Moondancer is having a little get-together in the castle courtyard later today. Wanna come?"
Twilight stared back in disbelief. Today was the day of Moondancer's party. The one she never attended because she was too focused on stopping Nightmare Moon. The day she was sent to Ponyville and met her friends.
"I..." How should Twilight even answer? She wanted to go, to make things right with Moondancer this time, but... her friends... and Nightmare Moon... "I'm... I'm sorry. I won't be able to attend. I'm being sent to Ponyville here soon."
Then, a thought occurred to her. A brilliant thought. A thought that maybe, just maybe, could fix everything before anything even went wrong.
"Actually, do you know where she is right now? I don't want her to think I'm skipping out on her."
Twinkle Shine, Lemon Hearts, and Minuette just stared at Twilight like she had grown a second head. "Um..." Lemon Hearts was the first to speak up. "Y-yeah. She should be in the castle courtyard setting up the party right now."
"Thanks! See you gals later!" Twilight dashed off, leaving three very confused ponies looking at each other in confusion.
Twinkle Shine chuckled half-heartedly. "Who is she and what did she do with Twilight Sparkle?"
If only she was fully committed to the idea that it was a joke.
"Aaah!"
Moondancer was understandably startled when Twilight teleported in front of her and nearly caused a two-pony pileup. Plates, party hats, and other bits of party paraphernalia flew in all directions before quickly being caught in Twilight's aura and placed gently on a nearby table. "Whoops! Hehe... Sorry, Moondancer." She held her hoof out to pull Moondancer up off the grass.
"Twilight! I... wasn't expecting anypony yet." She grabbed onto Twilight's hoof and was pulled up. "Er... you can teleport now?"
"Yeah, I can." Twilight looked around at the party she never attended with some amount of guilt. "Actually... I really hate to say this, but I don't think I can attend."
The effect on Moondancer was almost immediate. Her ears drooped, her demeanor dropped to an all-time low, and she had to look away to keep from crying. "Oh."
"Please, don't take this the wrong way. I'd like nothing more than to be here for you. But... here soon, I'm going to Ponyville on Celestia's orders." Twilight brought a surprised Moondancer into a hug. "But please... don't let it ruin your party. All of your other friends will still be here for you, and they all care a lot about you. And hey," Twilight pulled back a bit and looked into Moondancer's eyes, "I'll definitely attend your next party. Pinkie promise."
Moondancer just stared back at Twilight for several seconds, stuck somewhere between wanting to cry, wanting to smile, and being completely confused. Had Twilight ever acted like this before? Why had she suddenly changed? Regardless, the floodgates were too weak to wait for her decision to be made in a timely manner, and she found herself sobbing into Twilight's chest, where the two sat for several minutes before Moondancer was finally done.
Twilight smiled down at her. "You good?" A small nod and the two finally parted.
"You... do you really mean it? You'll be at my next party?"
Twilight nodded.
"...thank you," Moondancer said, smiling as she awkwardly wiped her eyes with a hoof.
"Hey," said Twilight, "if you ever decide to visit Ponyville while I'm there, you're welcome to come and hang out! I'll be sure to open up some of my schedule just in case you drop by, okay?"
Moondancer nodded. "Yeah... I'd like that."
Twilight smiled to herself as she trotted back towards her old tower. Maybe this reset wasn't so bad after all. She had a chance to fix her mistakes, ones she once had to live with. Perhaps she could even speed things along in some places?
As Twilight approached her tower, she couldn't help but notice that there were two guards and Celestia's royal chariot outside. Trotting up to her front door, she glanced at the two stoic, unmoving guards as she entered the abode. "H-hello? Celestia?" This hadn't happened last time. Celestia didn't pay her a visit today. What was going on?
On cue, Celestia trotted down the stairs, Spike trailing behind her. As she reached the bottom, she nodded at Twilight. "Twilight. I am here because Spike alerted me to your... unusual distress this morning. May I ask what exactly you meant by the things you said today? About missing castles and vanishing wings?"
Twilight froze. Should she tell Celestia? What if she spoiled the future? "I..." Twilight had trouble forming the right words. "I'm not really sure how much I should tell you..."
Celestia raised an eyebrow. "And what on earth could you possibly tell me that I shouldn't know about?"
Twilight took a step back. "N-no, I don't mean it like that, I just... I know things that are going to happen in the future."
Celestia scrunched up her face. "Thing such as?"
Twilight paused for a few moments, avoiding Celestia's gaze. Was there anything she could say? Yes... she could say what was about to happen over the next two days.
"Today you're going to send me to Ponyville to make friends with a very special group of five ponies. In the morning, Nightmare Moon will return after her thousand-year banishment. My five friends and I will venture into the Everfree Forest to retrieve the Elements of Harmony, and will use their power to defeat Nightmare Moon..." She looked up into Celestia's eyes. "...and turn her back into Luna." She looked away again. "You've been planning on sending me to Ponyville for a while now... but you're afraid that if I make friends, I won't need you anymore."
Celestia stood there for what felt like eons, mouth agape and eyes wide.
"Twilight... we need to talk."
Twilight sat awkwardly across from her mentor and former fellow princess. Or would that be her future fellow princess? Regardless, even in such a calm setting as the Canterlot Gardens, sipping tea with the Princess, she couldn't help but feel awkward as the Princess looked over her with confusion and a bit of fear.
"So..." Celestia finally set her teacup down. "The future. What can you tell me?"
Twilight took a deep breath. She had tried to compile everything on the way over here, so hopefully, she hadn't left any spoilers in. "Well... I told you about Luna already." Celestia nodded, and Twilight continued. "A few months after we become the new bearers, Discord breaks out of his stone prison. We defeat him, though..." Twilight turned and stared in the direction of Discord's statue, some hundred yards or more away from where they sat. "After Discord, in no particular order, we defeat the Changeling Queen, a couple ancient demons, a powerful unicorn or two out for revenge, an ancient threat or two sealed away by Starswirl and the Pillars, and some particularly evil plants... oh, and King Sombra." Celestia's mouth dropped open at that last one, and she nearly dropped the tea she was about to take a sip of.
Twilight paused and took a sip of her own tea. "At some point, you send me Star Swirl's journal, with the unfinished spell." Celestia's eyes grew wide and she just decided to set the tea aside until Twilight is finished, lest she have no tea at all. "I become an alicorn, we give the elements back to the Tree of Harmony, and I end up with a castle and an apprentice of my own."
Twilight sighed. "But now... everything reset for some reason. I'm back to square one."
A silence passed between the two as Celestia digested what she just heard. There are simply too many details Twilight had said, such as the bit about Ponyville and her fears, or the bit about Sombra and Star Swirl's journal, that she shouldn't know.
"...I believe you." Celestia finally said. "And... if what you say is true, then I suppose it's high time I sent you and Spike to Ponyville to make some friends."
Twilight nodded, smiling. "I couldn't agree more, Princess."
Good so far
Interesting premise and no grammatical mistakes as of now.
Yes.
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Yes? Yes!!
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Weird...
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I mean, I'm practically married to Grammarly at this point, so... no surprises there.
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что за хрень ты несёшь?
Very nice! The concept isn't anything new, but the execution is wonderful and entertaining! It kind of reminds me of the style that they use with the Eternal Loops/Yggdrasil Loops story. But this is going to be much more linear and with a better focus. I love it, and I hope you continue this.
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Да? Да. Да!
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I mean it's nothing new but it is well written and fun to read.
Would continue to read if further chapters done.
Regardless of the talent of the author (which you've certainly shown), retelling the show with minor tweaks or fixes is rarely worth the effort, Its good that you put this to rest when you did,
Interesting take. I would like to see how this version of Twilight handles Too Many Pinkies, Lightning Dust and Trixie...hopefully positive for them this time.
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I agree, which is why when/if I continue this, I'm skipping to the parts that are massively different, with only references to the minor differences between vignettes/chapters.
I'd love it if you decided to continue this! I'm looking forward to seeing how everything plays out in this story.
Please continue this. The execution is really nice, and the premise, to my knowledge, is new.
The cruelest author: "I made this but I dunno this is it THE END... Or is it? Hey Vsauce, Micheal here and today we're talking about the cruelty of false hope"
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I'm nothing if not a cruel tyrant.
I'm game for more, clean, crisp and who doesn't love fish out of water/time travel hijinks?
...Is it wrong to hope something like that happens to me? Probably... Though it would be so COOL!
Wait, you took the time to tailor the story so that each section had 380 words EXACTLY? Talk about attention to detail...
Got my attention. Continue this!
Continue it! Continue it!
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Eeyup! The first two sections ended up at or around 380, as did the fourth, so I just did some minor edits to make them all match up.
I do hope you continue this. It's a fascinating premise, Twilight going back and redoing everything, having already learned everything her life taught her the first time through. Even better, it doesn't seem like a bitter fixfic--instead of "this is how Twilight should have acted", it's "this is how Twilight would act if she already knew what was going to happen, what she was going to learn, and how to prevent at least part of the conflict". It's an entirely different set of challenges, with the possible added storyline of Twilight trying to find her way back to the Equestria she knows and the timeline she's familiar with. I would love to see this play out, though I'd certainly understand if this concept is too dead in your mind and you can't find a way to continue it.
I... hmmm... I'm rather curious to see what goes better and what goes wrong in new ways as well as any other butterfly effect stuff. If you continue it that is. This premise usually has a lot of frustration or bitterness from the author, but this feels crisp and more true to the characters as presented in the show. Gonna throw it in the tracking bin in case you do come back and throw some more good clean fun our way.
I could give you a emoji or something but this is good and you get this
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She seems a bit quick to enter "complete breakdown" mode, but this premise intrigues me, and I hope for/look forward to more.
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Agreed! I very rarely enjoy fixfics (since 99% of them are bitterness in a jar), but I thought the idea of a character being sent back to their own past with knowledge of the future was an interesting concept.
After all the positive feedback and the surprisingly large reception (20 upvotes in 6 hours???), I've started brainstorming about the rest of the story (from here to the epilogue). I've decided to have large sections of the show I skip. For example, I would skip most of Season 1, since that entire season boils down to either "it's mostly unchanged" or "it never happened because Twilight didn't need to learn the lesson". It just wouldn't be interesting to write down an episode with a few minor changes or write a chapter about how an episode failed to happen. I'll skip to the story beats that have major differences and/or major consequences down the line... Mostly two-parters, though also a number of single episodes and even some original material that is a direct result of the minor changes Twi makes (since you can't make a time-traveling omelet without breaking a few causality eggs).
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That's entirely fair, I might bump up the "10 minutes" line to "an hour" or something to make it a bit more believable that she'd be in crazy mode.
EDIT: Doing exactly that right now. Also fixed a couple misspellings I somehow missed.
As Discord would say: “I’m going to need more popcorn!”
.....after reading chapter one I hope so. I also wonder how much you'll go over in detail as oppose to what you'll skim over......or if we get one heck of a retelling of G4.
Fun Fact, each segment is 380 words long exactly.
Fun Fact, 1896 (the total words according to Fimfiction) is not a multiple of 380. Just saying.
Fun Fact 2, Fimfiction's total word counter is a broken mess, so I actually believe you.
Popular and well-loved concept. It all comes down to the delivery. Writing is good so far. Looking forward to more.
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Whoops! Turns out FiMFiction was right. That happened when I changed an extremely small detail earlier without thinking, my bad. Back to 1900!
Enjoyable, though the up-front reveal with Celestia struck me as off for these sorts of fics. Don’t get me wrong, I can see Twilight doing it, it’s just different.
This could be really interesting.
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Especially Dusty and Trixie. They deserved so much better.
Is Twilight lying here on purpose or is this suppose to be true? Because from the intro that Moondancer's party was that day, and Twilight wasn't sent to Ponyville until the next day.
Funny, I was remarking the other day that this concept doesn't show up much (if at all) in the pony fandom, whereas in the other larger fanfic fandoms (e.g. Naruto and Harry Potter) it's practically a genera in and of itself. The esteemed chaps I was discussing it with and I concurred that probably a good chunk is the arc vrs episode nature of the others verses pony, among others.
I am interested to see where you go with this.
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How long did THAT take?
Either paradox is discovered or its ignored. Please continue this new time line as purple smart figures out what happens when changes infect the future.
Hmm. Well, this should be an interesting demonstration of the Butterfly Effect. Though in this case, it's more like an attack helicopter beating its rotors. Looking forward to seeong what comes of this. Oh, and great tie-in with "Celestial Advice;" I'd honestly forgotten that this was at the tail end of Celestia's personal turmoil.
Also:
"I think you covered him with the powerful unicorns out for revenge."
"Yeah, I guess."
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The episode always gave me the impression that Moondancer's party was shortly after Twilight left Canterlot, on the same day, and my fic reflects as much.
I love the concept, it's inspired by ground hog day, grate movie by the way, the rest in thst day. If you decide to keep looping that same day you should have her eventually say fuck it and go on this spree, like doing whatever she wants for a while then fall into depression, but then try and find a way out, maybe even try and intercept Tempist shadow.
Soooooo... basically Twilight can now avoid every single villain in the show and preemptively squish Chrysalis.
This should be fun.
No one cares, it's pointless to the description of the story. You should post it in a blog or in a relevant group, I can't read the description and get a feel for it when that's there, glaring at me to read it before I know more than the story title, I don't think I'm alone.
Coverart should reflect the story, I'm even more hesitant to read it because the image screams "Groundhogs Day" while you and the title say otherwise.
Is it really the entire show, or just the day?
Still tracking the story, though.
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Who pissed in your Cheerios?
The guy's proud of his achievement and is displaying it to show that, there's nothing wrong with it regardless of the fact it somehow irritates you.
Dis gonna be gud
I hope Twilight tells Celestia (within ear shot of Discord hearing) that Discord mentioned how boring being a statue is, and explains he's fully conscious and goes on to say after almost 500 days, Celestia releases him. (gasp!) But eventually becomes somewhat more stable and (here Twilight lies) ends up marrying the Element of Kindness.
What's the point of time travel if you can't help your friends hook up!!
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That sounds like a great plan. Looking forward to it!
This right there had me worried. This made me think this was going to be one of those standard 08/15 "Oh, I'm in the past, let's just never tell anypony the truth and dance around the subject for 17 chapters" kinda setups.
And then you broke my expectations brilliantly.
One thing that seemed a little odd to me was Twilight's word-choice of "reset". Not "I'm in the past", or "I've taken the place of my past self", but "everything has reset". I guess it makes sense here, since the focus here won't be on "I've been sent back in time, I must find a way home", but still a bit of an odd word choice. *shrug*
...Wait, you've called this story "The day the show reset".
Does that mean Pinkie Pie, on some level, will be aware it's a rerun?
Awesome fic picture. I love groundhog day. Therefore this fic is now favorited/tracked. Can't wait to see more.