With the Zebras taking over Equestria, and the Pony males being led away as slaves, while the Pony females are left behind to breed new Zebras, one Human, 5 of his friends, and an old train, are the last ones standing that can help
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A bit harsh to eradicate the zebras. The idea I had was that after 10 years a fleet of zebra ships led by Cadence herself would come back to Equestria on a humanitarian mission. Or at least that's what they tell Me Amore Cadenza. Actually the ideal was for the zebras to come back with an invasion Force ready to eradicate any and all stallions left. Yet when they get close enough they find that not only has Equestria rebuilt itself but has reinforced self with all the different species that I mentioned in my earlier comment. Cadence finds out that shining armor has remarried and has 2 Folds. Also finds that now that Equestria is living in a democracy blue blood is basically president, Chancellor, prime minister whatever type of leader you want to call him. And with the help of the other species in Equestria are now thriving a lot better than they did under diarchy rule. With the help of the yaks dragons and hippogriffs they were able to rebuild their economy as well as improve the infrastructure. So when they pull into Manehattan Harbor all possessions of Interest I seized and the zebras are sent sailing home with a threat to never show their faces in Equestria again.
I'm really enjoying the story, and the new timeline is alright as well.
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interesting story idea. I have an idea myself, but with alil twist.
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Hello crank1116,
And yeah, you might be right. However, this story may very well be the very first anti-Zebradom story here on FIMFiction, following the very first, none other than "Fear from the Rails". I'm just so sick and tired of the Zebras winning, and no one being able to stop them. However, there is a method to my madness. Both "Fear from the Rails", and "American Retribution" are both set within the same universe and timeline as "Zebra Conspiracy", written by "Very Sleepy". I disliked that story a LOT, so I wrote "Fear from the Rails" as an anti-fic.
And I like your idea too. It makes some sense, and I could see it happening. (IF Blueblood was a good leader, that is! I could see him, Shining Armor, and perhaps Fancy Pants all sharing power, or one is in charge, and the other 2 are directly below him. And if I was in your world of a democratic Equestria, I'd marry either a Hippogriff, a Thestral, or a Kirin. I think that all 3 of those races are very cool.
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Hello Saphirus92,
And I'm glad that you like the story so far. Everything stays largely the same, at least until Chapter 5. Yes, the chapter still ends the same, but the middle becomes DRASTICALLY different! And after Chapter 5, there will be a brand-new Chapter 6, and a brand new Epilogue!
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Hello Saphirus92,
And what's your idea? I'm open to suggestions.