With the Zebras taking over Equestria, and the Pony males being led away as slaves, while the Pony females are left behind to breed new Zebras, one Human, 5 of his friends, and an old train, are the last ones standing that can help
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How do you explain them getting past cadence, luna, celestia and twilight? Especially the royal sisters? Seems like a rather large hurdle to get past
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It's never explained very well. Cadence gets some explanation in Chapter 1, and it's implied that slow corruption is what claimed Celestia and Luna, but it's never fully explained. The story that this is an anti-fic to, "Zebra Conspiracy" used brainwashing and potions, and some of that is implied in this story, but never fully confirmed. It's one of those things that you have to suspend your disbelief just a little bit in order for the story to happen. The Zebras managed to convince the Princesses that they needed the Zebras to keep going after the stallions all "got sick", and had to be taken away "for treatment". Taking out all of the stallions with their bio-engineered sickness, leaving the Zebras with only the confused mares and fillies, were able to take full advantage of that, and further manipulate the Ponies to their sick ends. However, the 6 Humans, their marefriends, and Gilda were also immune to the Zebra's virus, and that would come back to haunt the Zebras quite immensely.
But if the humans are dead, then they can't work...
Am I missing something here?
I'm enjoying the re-write though, so don't feel bad. It's way better than the original. Btw, my story, Battle of the Blanks is getting a re-write too. My mistakes are much worse than yours...my story didn't age well, but I'm fixing it. I want to just post the story as a separate one but FiM doesn't like you doing that per the terms.
I'm continuing to read, and eagerly await to see what happens next.
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Eh, maybe. Perhaps Zed was not thinking straight when he said this, and Cadence didn't correct him, though there is a darker possibility too. Perhaps Zed was implying that the Zebras would be able to bring the 6 Humans back as some kind of Zombies, but who knows. I left it open to interpretation
And I'm glad that you're enjoying the rewrite. And "Story of the Blanks" may be bad, but I'm sure that it pales in comparison to the overhaul that will be required in order to fix all of the problems with "Bermuda Beginnings" whenever I get around to working on that
And I hope that you enjoy the rest of it