The House at the End

There were stories. Stories about the house at the end of the street. Stories that made all the the families on the block keep there kids away from it. Too bad Twilight and Applejack's families were new to the street. They didn't know about the stories, of the House at the End.

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Azure Drache

Azure Drache #1 · Apr 8th, 2018 · · ·

The Idea was good :)

I Just would have choose the crusaders as Main Charakters, or somepony else with less cannon Backstory.

MadxHatter123

MadxHatter123 #2 · Apr 8th, 2018 · · ·

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Thank you, but, like I said in the authors notes, it was based on a nightmare I had, so, kept all all the characters that were in it the same, with Twilight, Applejack, and wooden Fluttershy and Pinkie.

Azure Drache

Azure Drache #3 · Apr 9th, 2018 · · ·

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Fair enough.

Just another litle thing, it seems you got a few errors from autocorrect here and there like: Their were stories, in your description, I guess you mean : There were stories? I am not a native speaker so I can be wrong, but a few spots feel like something got mixed up.