This story is a sequel to MLP: Dawn of Chaos
The saga continues! Maelstrom guides their team in the ways of chaos. Spike, or Disarray as he's know now, works towards finding his true place in the world. The Master of Mayhem discover their true calling. Together, they will become the most epic trolls Equis has ever known.
Their escapades will drive the Elements of Harmony to the brink, and force the hand of Princess Celestia, revealing something her and Twilight Sparkle had kept secret. Will they all be able to handle something so world shattering? Will Harmony prevail, or will Chaos reign supreme?
This is a whole new Age of Chaos, and one thing is certain; no matter what, nothing will ever be the same again.
This story takes place in the same multiverse but is an alternate reality retelling to that in Spike: Lord of Disharmony and Chaos and it’s sequel Chaos: Age of Spike both by Kaliann25(https://www.fimfiction.net/user/148887/Kaliann25). Reading those stories aren’t required to understand this one, but it’s still highly recommended because they are awesome. They really are amazing stories, and inspired this one, so check them out.
Awesome
Whoa, I didn't think you would bring that prank out.
Ah, such memories. I remember I struggled for two days trying to translate the climax of this chapter.
Anyway, I loved the scolding in the end. Funny, and direct.
Read ya' later!!
Aw the shipping is on. One of my favorite parts of the original.
And, is this gonna be the Crazy Doors' prank?
And, I was right. Oh, the memories! This was the first chapter I tought my story was taking form. The Crazy Doors were one of my favorite elements to mention. Thank you for bringing them back, and the office.
BTW, is the Other One making an appearance?
And Rumble joined the fun. Thank you for reusing the detail about his pet rabbit. Is Devil going to become Angel's mate as Demon?
Anyway, great chapter.
Read ya' later!!
I didn't think you would redo the vacation chapter. And revive the idea of the Secret Service and the Shadow Bolts. Thanks, those were my favorite parts of the original fic.
By the way, are you going to bring the Sword Art Online references too? Just asking.
Anyway, great chapter. Again, it brings back some memories.
Read ya' later!!
Huh, shorter than the original but it's okay. I like how you managed Diamond's and Silver's insight about the Masters of Mayhem, and their relationship as well. (Sigh) In the original version they were still children at this arc, but the romantic tone you gave them from here was just perfect.
I hope you have the next chapter soon.
Read ya' later!!
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Shorter? How so?
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Well, you are making 2 chapters. I just made a long one.
I was just thinking about it around the end... Luna allying with Spike, the little sisters and brothers against the big brothers and sisters that think they know everything.
Update?
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Soon.
Let's see if Twilight learn her lesson this time. If not, maybe Disarray should think of make her a filly and put her in class.
Way Way stronger... From the muzzle of Celestia... Maybe this could make Twilight use her brain
It's time for...
ANOTHER TILE IN THE ROOF!!!
And questions.
1. Will we see the Spike’s crazy glasses?
2. Will Twilight be in trouble for lying to Celesta about she did the paperwork and not telling her that she has Spike do it while she was in the spa? Will Spike/Disarray tell Celesta about it or will she found out on her own?
This is a really good story I keep it up
That kapow prank was really good.
This is going on my favorites for sure.
Hahahahaaaa, I love it when the antagonists are actually intelligent. It always makes for a better story.
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY.
*exaggerated gasp* A party? WITHOUT PINKIE!? *CRACK* Huh? *turns around and sees a crack in reality* Ohhh, that's not good. . . . . EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF! *runs away screaming*
Of course D.T. and S.S. would be the first ones to figure it out. Shouldn't be too much longer until they get revealed. . . . . What is this odd sense of dread I'm feeling.
HAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh poor sun-butt.
I just discovered this story today, and I already can't wait for the next chapter.
this is was fun and I really love what you did. see the next time I think to type or the end whatever comes first, see you.
This was a fun chapter and twilight finally get the woke up call she need and maybe this will be a step in her and spike being little bro and big sis again. hope to see more of this fun and awesome story into next chapter. :)
Update?
Is the next chapter coming up soon?
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Hi.
Im working on the next few chapters, but with life stuff, work, and a bit of writers block on some aspects, progress is very very slow.
Okay. Good luck!👍 Thanks for the reply.
Still love it, wish for a update
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Go go Pony Rangers
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Welcome back
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thank you
FOR THOUSANDS OF YEARS I HAVE SLUMBERED! WHO DARES DISTURB MY-
Oh, Age of Chaos updated. Wonderful!
Huh. Damn
A cliffhanger... Now, we need to wait until Christmas of 2022
What else can I say but PRAISE THE SUN
Well this is going to end well for them.😒
I hope this comes back im loving this so much
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You know I was tempted to actually wait because of this comment.
Ha Groundhog Day nice
Thats kinda cool actualky
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If you need a excuse, sure, use it
It lives!!!!!!!
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I don't need an excuse. Just thought it'd be funny
If they are the opposite of the harmony elements why don't they do the opposite of the harmony elements... Like... Bad Seed destroying crops, lying or Party Pop who should be destroying parties, making everyone unhappy and so on.
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Because they arent their hard opposites, they are their rivals. The Chaotic 6 each have their own element and sphere of influence. Together they make up the chaotic forces of nature. Bad Seed for example is the embodiment of the chaotic force of flora; the wild forest, a rival to apple farmer Applejack. Shadow Blitz is the chaotic embodiment of uncontrolable weather; a hard rival to weather pony Rainbow Dash. Chimera is the chaotic embodiment of the untamable fauna, a rival to forest ranger Fluttershy. Party pop is the embodiment of true celebration and parties, as parties are naturaly chaos. This is a special cas, because in this instance Pinkie Pie is a pale immitation of her, not the other way around. You'll understand what I mean by that in later chapters. Hymphonic's sphere is society itself, or rather the place where the heart and mind meet. Mind over matter. And Dissaray's is the pure raw power of chaos itself; magic that cant be catagorized, or studied, or understood. A hard rival to Twilight Sparkle, the alicorn avatar of harmony magic.
All in all they arent meant to be hard mirror opposites of the elements of harmony, but rather opposing forces to the harmonious world that ponykind had created.
Hope that help clear some stuff up
Will the Harmony team still solve some friendship problem in Starlight's village?
“My lady” Starlight said meekly “I am ashamed to say, I do not know you”
👆🏻 From my point of view i think starlight should have said: my Goddess instead of my lady... because Goddess sounds better and appropriate.