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TerraZeal


33 year old mother of two who likes to write fanfiction. I haven't wrote much MLP fanfiction, so of course any tips are appreciated. I write for fun, not money, so don't expect perfection.

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After his death at the hands of Archangel Michael during the battle of the Apocalypse, Lucifer Morningstar finds himself not quite dead after all. In fact, he's quite alive. Unfortunately, he's a pastel pony in a world of happy, harmony loving pastel ponies. How did Lucifer get to Equestria? Did God punish him for his acts of evil against humanity? Or was it his Aunt, the Lady of Darkness? Either way, Satan is definitely not in Kansas anymore.

Crossover with Supernatural and the Bible. You don't need to have watched Supernatural or read the Bible to understand this. You do need to know who Lucifer/Satan/the Devil is, however. Otherwise, this won't make sense to you! This is NOT Human In Equestria. It's Angel In Equestria...who is turned into a pony. So that's why there's no human tag. Luci is NOT human.

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There is a great deal of potential here. You have peaked my interests. :yay:

Definatly liking it so far.

I really like your charactization of Lucifer in this story because it feels more like a classical view of him. As he is assosiated with the sin of Pride and as someone who he is evil not because he spites his father, but rather he choose a path of evil because he loaths life itself (at least inferior life that is not of heaven).

Too many modern works portray him as being evil because he simply hates God, so i am glad that your version also seems to be more of the prideful rebel. Arrogant, calculating, hates humanity and wish to subjugate it, but deep down wishing for happiness and respects his father.

And ofcourse the Pink demon part was funny as well. :pinkiehappy:

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My Lucifer LOVED God, and still sort of does. He just hates the fact that God loves the "inferior" mortals more than He loves Luci. This Luci fell from Heaven mostly because he refused God's order to love humans more than God, which is what God wanted him to do. Luci basically IS the sin of Pride. Which is why he hates his new pink hair. Luci and pink hate each other. I was going to make him an earth pony at first, but decided to go with pegasus so he would at least have his precious wings with him. He wants his magic back, but is being cut off from it by....Someone. And yes, pink demon. Anyone who doesn't know Pinkie Pie will definitely think Pink Demon! Let's hope Luci never finds out about Pinkamena. :pinkiecrazy:

How did Lucifer get to Equestria? Did God punish him for his acts of evil against humanity?

Well, he had to go down to get there, so presumably, Ponyville's ZIP code is somewhere in the general 666es. Saccharine candy hell, but still hell.

With a sigh, Lucifer risked looking down. If he'd been a lesser sort of being, he would have screamed. Instead of the body of one of those talking monkeys, he was in the body of...a small horse. Even worse, a small horse with red fur and...oh, dear Father, no...a bright PINK mane and tail. It was CURLY, too! Lucifer then lost all of his dignity and let out an ear-piercing scream. This was The. Worst. Possible. THING!

The comparison between Lucifer and Rarity. Smart.

Lucifer turned, blinked. There was a weird mark on his flank. A ruby-gold half-sun slowly rising above a gold landscape. He almost laughed. The pink thing was sort of right. Dawn Star. Morning Star. Of course. Lucifer Morningstar. It made total sense. He glanced back at the pink pony, who was so perilously close to touching his flank with her nose. He kicked a hoof backwards, hitting the pink pony's own butt mark or whatever they were called and sending her head over hooves into the grass.

I would have put the mark of cain.

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Nah, the Mark of Cain is Amara's thing. And Cain's thing. This is more of a story about Lucifer trying to find redemption and peace, so he gets his original "name" back. That's why Morning Star. He's WANTING to go back to being a good son, but doesn't know how because he still hates mortals because they're God's faves. Yes, God and The Darkness are here. They're just not...well, Chuck and Amara anymore. A sort-of version of Team Free Will also hangs around. Kind of pony versions of Dean, Sam, Bobby, Cas, Crowley, and my favorite little witch Rowena.

And Gabriel. As himself, more or less. Because causing funny shit to happen in a world of talking ponies is totally something he would do. It's like slow dancing aliens, TV land, and Mystery Spot...but even MORE silly and ridiculous.

If I didn't remember what a monster the Morningstar was, I'd actually want to give him a hug. Still, great chapter. Nice to see this fic alive once more.

I've been watching too much Supernatural, and especially after watching S13 and what happened to Luci...I kinda felt he needed a second chance. I mean, if AMARA could be given a second chance, why not Luci?

Comment posted by Marcthelightspark2004 deleted Dec 6th, 2018

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Agreed. This is awkward, but I started my own story based off this, but with a different plot in mind.

YEEEESSSSSS!!!!! IT’S ALIVE!!!!! THANK YOU, I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!

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All my stories are alive. I just need inspiration most of the time. And reviews help a lot. If I know people want to read something, I'll usually work harder or get more inspiration by...repeatedly watching the shows involved, like SPN and MLP for this one.

Aren't angels and demons go to the empty after they die or is lucifer dreaming?

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He didn't die. God/Chuck intervened right before he would be sent to the Empty and sent him to Equestria in an attempt to get him to understand harmony and friendship, basically. Chuck wants him to understand WHY Team Free Will was able to beat him, despite being "weak mortals". Amara is just there because...she's Chuck's awesome sister and I like her. Besides, Chuck + Amara = Harmony, and that's what MLP is about, too. Light (Chuck) cannot exist without Dark (Amara) so both are in this fic. Gabriel plans on appearing later, if you believe Amara. As we know, he didn't die in SPN canon S5 when Luci "killed" him, too.

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Its fanfic. And AU. Open to interpretation! And criticism. And help if you notice something that makes no sense. :derpytongue2:

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