Pink Delta is a dead earth pony specialising in chemistry, who works... worked in the Ministry of Arcane Sciences' magical substances division. When he is reawakened as a ghoul 90 years after the end of the great war, he has barely managed to get used to his new "life" before being swept up in the expedition of a mysterious doctor and her very strange unicorn bodyguard.
Good first chapter, I'm interested to see more going on. Ghoul protags are always lovely to see and the characters are shaping up nicely too. Did spot a few typos and grammar slips, but nothing major. Hungry for more~
Capitalise "What" and change the sentence structure for a better flow - What he did care about, however, was work ethic...
I should warn you, some people will look at the protagontist and think this is a self-insert story.