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I like this and hope you update more often than my fallout story.
Thanks. I'll try.
Another decent chapter. I only have a few issues with it though. First, the human is still in his armor so how can any pony (Fizz) know he's cute? Second, the memories of the Hoover Dam don't make sense at least to me. How can he have memories of what never happened? Overall the story is a bit face paced still with some spelling and grammar errors. You might consider finding an editor/proofreader for future projects. Still though, keep up with your work.
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Thanks Honestly first story I've ever written in my life. Even going through grade school all the papers I had to write where research papers. Wolf said that to Fizz. And for the memory thing not saying down here.
I think my brain is melting from all the cheese and errs, but a good story anyways!!