I loved it. For some reason though, I keep imaging Rarity having befriended the best assassin in all of canterlot as a friend. One that does alot of dirty work for her with assassinations and such XD. Anyways I kinda imagined spike reverting back to how he was as the rapist.
Any specific reason for starla's change? I know things between her and Rarity went down a wrong path but, yea.....I can't see the maid bit.
why did you make Spike a soft killer? why not torture, killing them is an easy way to break them, the hard way is to make them think there already dead, broken, crushed and forgotten. Make them wish they where never born by burning and pelling their skin or even let Rarity do ''unholy thing's'' to their **** you now, just to make it more injoyable
1335654 In two updates there'll be a chapter called "Secrets Abound." Those who are faint of heart or with weak stomachs will have to skip the entire beginning part.
Oh dear. That's quite a vicious circle. Spike hurts Rarity, Twilight fixes him. A too deeply wounded Rarity takes it on herself to 'contain' Spike, but unlike Pinkie, she does it by systematically destroying regular-Spike's personality. Now there's only traces of that left, and in her hubris and delusions, Rarity has Spike do exactly what jerk-Spike did, because she thinks she's a) invincible because she has a dragon, and b) that she's in the right. After all this, what's striking is that when compared to each other, Honeybuzz comes out as the better person. I do wonder if Starla still plans on breaking Spike out of his brainwashing; perhaps, after witnessin what she could unleash, she thinks differently now... Or is more determined than ever. After all, regular-Spike would most likely be horrified himself by what he's done, and he deserves to not be a monster any more.
Also, heh, whether Honeybuzz will take Rarity's words into account, and send out some colts for a little chat with Windfall...
I loved it. For some reason though, I keep imaging Rarity having befriended the best assassin in all of canterlot as a friend. One that does alot of dirty work for her with assassinations and such XD. Anyways I kinda imagined spike reverting back to how he was as the rapist.
Any specific reason for starla's change? I know things between her and Rarity went down a wrong path but, yea.....I can't see the maid bit.
Ask politely, get an OC in the story? What a sweet deal.
why did you make Spike a soft killer? why not torture, killing them is an easy way to break them, the hard way is to make them think there already dead, broken, crushed and forgotten. Make them wish they where never born by burning and pelling their skin or even let Rarity do ''unholy thing's'' to their **** you now, just to make it more injoyable
Extreme violence and no sex? Well this is going to suck.
*reads*
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Who, Fancy Pants? Or is this just a story idea?
Try to remember what happened in Her Heart 4, but it'll be explained further in "Secrets Abound"
It's touched on more in the next chapter.
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You already have an OC in my queue.
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In two updates there'll be a chapter called "Secrets Abound." Those who are faint of heart or with weak stomachs will have to skip the entire beginning part.
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1336401 orite bro hurr hurr //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
1336401now im excited
Oh dear. That's quite a vicious circle. Spike hurts Rarity, Twilight fixes him. A too deeply wounded Rarity takes it on herself to 'contain' Spike, but unlike Pinkie, she does it by systematically destroying regular-Spike's personality. Now there's only traces of that left, and in her hubris and delusions, Rarity has Spike do exactly what jerk-Spike did, because she thinks she's
a) invincible because she has a dragon, and
b) that she's in the right.
After all this, what's striking is that when compared to each other, Honeybuzz comes out as the better person. I do wonder if Starla still plans on breaking Spike out of his brainwashing; perhaps, after witnessin what she could unleash, she thinks differently now... Or is more determined than ever. After all, regular-Spike would most likely be horrified himself by what he's done, and he deserves to not be a monster any more.
Also, heh, whether Honeybuzz will take Rarity's words into account, and send out some colts for a little chat with Windfall...
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You may be getting yerself confused with the three branching arcs in DSP. See 1224724
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Oh no don't get me wrong, I already know, it is just hopeful wishing here.
Also no, I keep imagining it because...well have you every read the night angel series? If not, forget I said anything.
I hope so....
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Ah, yes, I don't really know why I didn't get that before.
Amazing.
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The violence wasnt as bad as the warning made it seem. I was afraid this was gonna turn into sweet apple massacre or something.