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So, my first FIC made by just myself. Also my first clopfic. So, please, judge me as if I have been doing them forever, because i need the criticism. Just because it's my first time doesn't mean I need special treatment.
So, how do you guys like it? I decided to write a sexty minute clopfic to releave some stress. Total time? 54:51. I only had five minutes to edit, so thats why there still may be errors. I did ma best! How do you guys like the Rarity x Cheerilee? The reason I chose this couple over Rainbowshy or Fluttermac is because this pair is semi-original. I have yet to read a FIC with this pairing so I figured, why the hell not!
Oh! Another thing! I may make a non-clopfic about the painting. The story would start with Rarity having to pick Sweetie up and finding the paintings Scootaloo made. I would really love to make a FIC solely based on that one scene. What do you guys think?!
Oh, and about pace of the story, sorry. I only had sixty minutes. Usually, I would make it WAY longer and WAY more detailed, but I wanted to test my skill and see how good of a FIC I could produce in the time it takes to bake half a pie.
Thanks and I love every one of you
This is nice, but I guess I will have to find my watersports collection elsewhere.
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Well, i don't judge man, it just isn't my style. Heck, this kind of story isn't my style, but i wanted to relieve some stress and this is perfect between longer stories :)
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Thanks man! It is a little bit on the faster side in terms of clop and story, but like i said, i only had sixty minutes :p Thanks for your feedback!
Although I sometimes enjoy these, there isn't enough mare x stallion shipps. And I know it's because it consists mostly of mates but still.
People need to start writing more straight fics.
Otherwise, this is pretty good.
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I wanted to do a unique ship, and since there are only a few stallions, the pairs become to un-original.
Remember though, there are moar to come, and the next one will be straight
That's what OC's are for ;)
I really think you should go ahead with that non-clop fic. It sounds like a good basis and, as you said, an original pairing.
966593
Just started it
not bad and i must say interesting pairing
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Thanks man!
969914 no problem always up for giving positive comments
as well as seeing new stories unfold
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Your profile picture... take all my want
974061 i take your want and raise you kumquats
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Fold.
976049 thought that might happen...
Rarilee Punch....