Ghouldash97. You have earned a fave on the story and a follow. Not just because of the Soda choice for Spike. But I actually like this story and like how you portray Spike and Ember. Plus Papa Torch feels like a soft teddy bear on sec and a Grizzly bear the next.
Nothing much & special happening at the moment, but I am a sucka for Human Spike stories as of late and the fact he's going out with Ember, this does have my full attention, so I'll wait & see how this plays out , plus I'm curious as to why Ember wants to date Spike.
Ok dude, I don't mean any disrespect, but get yourself a prereader. The writing feels really unorganic and forced. The story has a great premise, but needs more polish. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you soon.
Excuse me, but, how much was it for two sodas, a side dish, and a pizza!? I could eat at a good restaurant to my heart's content with about 2/3 of that, jeez.
Spike! My bro!
Ghouldash97. You have earned a fave on the story and a follow. Not just because of the Soda choice for Spike. But I actually like this story and like how you portray Spike and Ember. Plus Papa Torch feels like a soft teddy bear on sec and a Grizzly bear the next.
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Thanks, dude! Dr Pepper was my favorite soda, so I decided to make Spike have one.
Great, now I'm hungry for a carnivore special pizza.
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You are cool. I can't wait for more of this story.
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Thanks again.
This looks interesting. Let's do this!
To the Arcade!!!!
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No problem.
my Swedish heart thats a lot of money for 2 drinks a side dish and a pizza💸💸!
With that kind of money here you can get a fancy dinner and wine.
Nothing much & special happening at the moment, but I am a sucka for Human Spike stories as of late and the fact he's going out with Ember, this does have my full attention, so I'll wait & see how this plays out , plus I'm curious as to why Ember wants to date Spike.
Ok dude, I don't mean any disrespect, but get yourself a prereader. The writing feels really unorganic and forced. The story has a great premise, but needs more polish. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you soon.
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Thanks. It means a lot to see you reading my story.
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by god how what was this pizza made of gold and gem stones XD
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XD
Excuse me, but, how much was it for two sodas, a side dish, and a pizza!? I could eat at a good restaurant to my heart's content with about 2/3 of that, jeez.
I'm getting curious. Where is Twilight in this story?
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What do you mean by "to see you read"?
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Well, you know. Just happy to see a critique such as yourself read my story.
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I just never realized that I had a reputation here is all.
I think I'm blushing.
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Well, you were reviewing my writing.
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Oh snap I misunderstood.
LMAO
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Yeah, you did. Anyway, it was nice talking to you.
It's an hour away. wtf?
It's highway robbery. $56.72 for a pizza meal? it better be dancing and doing tricks on my tongue before I spend that kind of money. XD
That is an interesting way to start the conversation.
interesting second question, so what's Spike's
How did it take so long? Seriously if you can get from Sweet Apple Acres to CHS in less then 15 minutes (see Rainbow Rocks), how does it take an hour?
I wonder how that kind of talk actually compares to real life dates.
I'd never know, I've never been on a date...
eyyy my man know what up!
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Dr Pepper is my shit
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At Domino's one pizza is $5.99
Get two pies and they somehow get $36.00
Not a surprise honestly