Nice chapter, Spike was a bit better this time about well he wasn't at least a ass or a whipping boy this time around so I can take it. And not to mention he seems to be at least trying to make a good impression on Ember's father, so he isn't foolish enough to show how much he doesn't want to be on this date infront of him. Now that it is just him and Ember tho this is where the real question of his character will arise.
After a second re-reading, I get the feeling Spike is hiding something to act the way he did towards Ember after she helped him. And it looks like Ember has some sort of (intimidating) track record.
When I read the part about Torch, I can't help but think of Slade Wilson from Arrow and the mental image of Slade in a Hawaiian shirt is both hilarious and terrifying. That pretty much sums up Torch for me.
I know that I'm just starting this story, but already, it's pissing me off how Spike's being portrayed as such a pansy....I mean it seems like everyone else's asshole meter is jacked to 11 just to show how much of a doormat Spike is.
I get that things are probably gonna get better, but seriously things have to turn in his favor, and I mean quickly...
Nice chapter, Spike was a bit better this time about well he wasn't at least a ass or a whipping boy this time around so I can take it. And not to mention he seems to be at least trying to make a good impression on Ember's father, so he isn't foolish enough to show how much he doesn't want to be on this date infront of him. Now that it is just him and Ember tho this is where the real question of his character will arise.
Torch seems nice.....
you have my interest.
Okay, not gonna lie... I'm both proud and a little angry/jealous about you getting featured. Congrats.
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Thanks, dude! Means a lot.
8739968 just a heads up, if you already have the Equestria Girls tag, you don't need the human tag. Just seems unnecessary but not a bad thing.
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Alright. Thanks for the tip.
After a second re-reading, I get the feeling Spike is hiding something to act the way he did towards Ember after she helped him. And it looks like Ember has some sort of (intimidating) track record.
When I read the part about Torch, I can't help but think of Slade Wilson from Arrow and the mental image of Slade in a Hawaiian shirt is both hilarious and terrifying. That pretty much sums up Torch for me.
This looks interesting.
I'm curious where it goes!
(And can you add the cover source?)
At least his friends aren't at the same place those two are going.
You better make a new fic with Spike as Batman now.
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Same mistake with the dialogue as last chapter. Same fix as well.
Okay... Torch is needlessly scary here, Ember can take care of herself and can ... well... break Spike.
I have a feeling Spike may need to keep Celestia's little warning in mind, provided it's not something he doesn't want.
I know that I'm just starting this story, but already, it's pissing me off how Spike's being portrayed as such a pansy....I mean it seems like everyone else's asshole meter is jacked to 11 just to show how much of a doormat Spike is.
I get that things are probably gonna get better, but seriously things have to turn in his favor, and I mean quickly...
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Whether she can take care of herself or not, every father worries about their daughter.