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WARNING: Major character death. If you are not fine with that, please turn away, now.
Some mistakes, once made, cannot be erased, no matter how much you want it to.
Such a mistake has already been committed.
And some decisions, once made, can never be reversed.
Such as letting yourself fall after your flames are completely extinguished.
Such a decision is being made right now.
An entry for the A Two-Faced Charade contest.
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Who was speaking at the very end?
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It was supposed to be a dull thought, like a silent voice that both of them could hear at the very end. Think of it like a conscience. Or the wind carrying a message, if you believe in magical stuff.
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Thanks. I wasn't sure
This was... something new.
A bit of a headache at first tbh, but once I found a reading pattern that allowed me to take in all the nuances of this, it was an interesting read. At first I though Trixie was having a monologue in front of Starlight's gave or something, since the cover and such only implied her death, but after a bit I realized what was about to happen. A cruel twist of fate for both of them to do this at the same time, and I liked how their thoughts became one at the end..
Also, is it only me, or does it feel like you were a bit inspired by Lithium from Evanescence?
Darling, I forgive you after all
Anything is better than to be alone
And in the end I guess I had to fall
Always find my place among the ashes
This is a good entry with a very interesting style, I wish you good luck!
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Goddammit how did you read my mind about the song part!! I absolutely [censored] love that song and I always use that as a way to channel my sad emotions.
I thank you for the nice comment and I wish you good luck too!
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Good songs make good stories ;)
Thanks! And no matter who wins, FimFic is definitely richer in nice sad romance stories now ^^
"Because I've been taught my whole life that nothing is constant but change..."
Genius! Also, love these kind of stories! Here's your tenth like!
TwiStar is better...
This was good. I liked it. It got me thinking as to whether the couples of mop may have complimentary eye colors. Like glim glams blue eyes matching lula’s coat and vice versa
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Then why are you reading this story?
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I agree with you but this story is so heart wrenching.
I appreciate how well the two thought processes connect and contrast. Really puts the relationship in an interesting light