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jjb0420


Hello, I'm jjb, or the Traveler. These will be my first fan-fictions, and I hope you can join me and enjoy the ride. Thank you, and as Asriel once said, 'Don't Kill and Don't be Killed, Alright?'

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You all know the story....................A unicorn, student under the ruler of Equestria, meets six ponies who open her eyes to something magical. But...............What if someone else entered the story, and changed everything?

This is the story of a mysterious, kind, shy pegasus named Lightmare, a student under Princess Celestia alongside Twilight. Unlike Twilight, she has her own story to tell, and is willing to help her friends along the way. Who is Lightmare? Where did she come from? And what's in store for her and her friends?

1st Person view(Will be using words such as I and say/says)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Certainly interesting. I can see some room for improvement (mainly you slip between first and second person) but not a bad story overall. I look forward to more. ^.^

Do you think Nightmare Moon will like this Story????

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