In this chapter there are 19 times you wrote OverMare in one form or another. Now this of course is a writing error. The M is not capitalized in Overmare.
This small but also very, very noticeable error kept bugging me the entire time i was reading this chapter
I liked the perk at the end especially. Feels like a real personality trait as a opposed to a videogame buff. Can't wait to see how/when/if things go horribly wrong.
Nice
I am loving Ivory, competent, and active, Her dialogue is also fun and feels natural. Keep up the good work!
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In this chapter there are 19 times you wrote OverMare in one form or another. Now this of course is a writing error. The M is not capitalized in Overmare.
This small but also very, very noticeable error kept bugging me the entire time i was reading this chapter
I liked the perk at the end especially. Feels like a real personality trait as a opposed to a videogame buff. Can't wait to see how/when/if things go horribly wrong.