To Be More Than Strong

Shortly after the changeling invasion the Royal Guard increase their training efforts. Most of the guards see that day as a major defeat, some are mentally scared, and one cherishes the event.

Just a little something I made in between the bigger fic I am working on, didn't really edit this one too hard so sorry for any typos, missed commas, etc.

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Feather of Truth

Feather of Truth #1 · Jan 15th, 2018 · 1 · ·

hmm. interesting. I like the idea that someone in the guard could hold their own. Especially considering 6 civilians were basically taking on an entire platoon of changelings.

Gizmo Gear

Gizmo Gear #2 · Jan 15th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Yes indeed. There are three things that make a good fighter. Training, experience, and equipment(armor, weapons, etc.*coughenchantedrockscough*).
To say he is a good fighter would be saying the sky is blue. It's painfully obvious

Grekoy

Grekoy #3 · Jan 16th, 2018 · 1 · ·

This is awesome. I would love to see Luna and Dual fight. Any chance of a sequel or any continuation?

Crono411

Crono411 #4 · Jan 16th, 2018 · · ·

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I tried writing a bit of the fight but my writing skill does not seem to be at the necessary level. It gets clunky with all the weapons and his ability to sense them. It either slows down the combat to a crawl or I end up getting to vauge and feel like I'm writing it lazily.

I might write a little epilogue that summarizes the outcome in a comidiac manner.

Grekoy