Something is destroying Equestrias from different universes one after the other. A sole unicorn will put together a team comprised of ponies from different worlds to stop the destruction of everything. But what is causing the end of all these worlds? And can this team manage to come together to stop it?
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Oh my. It has potential.
Maybe there's too much "She" in this chapter but it might be only me.
So well, let's see where this goes.
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That's fair. With future chapters I'll try to work better on that. Appreciate the feedback. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story as I post it.
Nooooooo! Not Rainbow!
Even if she was only that Equestrias' version of her.
Not that I don't feel bad for Emerald. She was like a dog that had been stuck in a cage all its life and just when it finally gets out it's obliterated. Poor thing.
I look forward to more though!
Aha~ So, the main villain is a she, huh? I'm curious to see who it is.
Applejack, no! You're working with the villain?!
Because it's her DESTINY!!
Queen Chrysalis?!
It'll be interesting to see her interaction with everyone else. XD
Overall, a good chapter that leaves me looking forward to the next one!
Wait. So if this Twilight a Princess but does not know of alternate worlds, then the only way this would make sense of Seasons 5 have yet to be. However we have Crystal War Timeline Rainbow, so that contradicts that. Since her timeline was created as a result of Starlight Glimmer's actions. However if she later does end going through thos events somehow after this adventure, then she should not be as surprised of the alternate timelines for she already experienced them.
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I have no response because you're completely right. I'll probably try to edit that chapter so it works out better. Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
It's a trap! 😱
Or anymore than Rainbow Dash in their cider cellar.
Everyone run for their lives!
A different species entirely, eh? I can't wait to see who it is! Also, this is my favorite chapter so far!
If the main villain was voiced, what would she sound like?
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I picture her having a deep, clearly modulated voice which she does using her magic. Kind of an intimidation tactic. Thanks for the comment. Hope you’re enjoying the story.
Fight! Fight! Fight!
Oh, no...
Sad Rainbow Dash makes me sad.
The fightblocks are strong in this chapter. XD
o.o Ohhhhhhhhh. I never would have guessed the last recruit was going to be her. xP
Ooh, do I sense an encounter with the main villain in the next chapter?
Yay, Applejack gets a happy ending! :3 ...I hope. >.>
What, not an apple turnover? You know, to turnover that frown... ;D
Aw, no. Not Applebloom. D= I hope she's able to be helped.
Anything? >:)
I'm with you, Applejack. >:l Of course Chrysalis would betray them! Especially if the Master promised to spare her world if she lead the Master to everyone.
Or that. >.>
No, no, no. This is the perfect moment. >:\ What do you have to say for yourself, Tsunami?
And to be even more safe let's make a plan C! xP
So, who's going to be the tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TokenEvilTeammate?