Inspired by Waking Nightmares AU by KnightMysterio.https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7360739/1/Waking-Nightmares
Some of the mercenaries from Mann Co start finding themselves in a world dominated by colorful ponies. must admit it is a nice place, the ponies are a very welcome species but slowly the mercenaries start to realize there is a reason why they were brought here and why all of them are somehow connected to the element bearers.
an ancient darkness is gaining strength and if they and their new pony friends cannot stop it, then both their worlds are in grave danger.
Chapters (80)
It's too.. what's the word? Sudden? OK so if Spy was a changing wouldn't that mean he would be considered a traitor and be send to prison right away?
I couldn't get past the Spy and Zebra part because it got boring quickly.
not necessarily, the invasion of Canterlot hasn't happened and from the looks of the episodes before that, I do not think the pony people know what a changeling is.
in my story, Zecora knows what a changeling is, but because Spy was a gentleman towards her, she decided to carefully trust him.
I am sorry to hear that. what was it that made it boring?
it will help me how I should write future stories.
I have a bit of a question about heavy
Is he going to have some sort of frendship with the medic?
I would explain what I mean more but I don't want to spoil the comics.
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yes Heavy will have a friendship with Medic
Nice cheers mate :3
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thanks! :D
What about the pyros?
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they will appear in later chapters
10/10 straight to DVD
KnightMysterio did a rewrite of Waking NIghtmares. Check it out.
Wow. Zecora sure knows a lot about changelings. Maybe there are changelings in her homeland?
Pyro’s gonna get a good kick out of this,
Huh, so Medic’s Medigun became part of his magic. That’ll be interesting once he learns how to make a shield, which is surprisingly borderline OP in MvM.
I like some of the changes, but I’m really looking forward to seeing Pyro’s reaction to Equestria.
So, does this mean that Scout is French-American?
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yeah, doesn't mean he can a squat French
one thing i look forward to is when MANN co hires the mercs to protect their facilities
perhaps when they were off to save the crystal empire from sombra, the mercs break out into song, based on what their human counterparts are feeling
YES
I actually prefer Pyro as a dragon instead of as a pony.
Friendly word of advice, link to that story. Please respond to this comment.
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should be fixed now
Ugh, Twilight’s lessons as Celestia’s successor-attack dog is really starting to pay off.
I won’t blame you.
Your story so far is very interesting and fun to read and I would love to see it continue! Also a Luna Eclipse chapter is a great idea.
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This is a wonderful story so far and I hope to see more. Even though you did take a few liberties I personally believe they made the story more entertaining!
At least Cerberus has a toy to play with when he’s bored.
Why is there two instances of the same thing?
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it should be fixed now
That surname... Does this mean that Spy’s part of the Dark Brotherhood?
Hmm. I don’t think there’s much of a stigma about it in Equestria. I wonder how they’ll be when they find that out
Forgot that Spy decided to stay. Oh well.
I just realized that Scout and his two half-sisters can become French citizens.
The grammar here is lacking and it breaks the flow of the story. I keep getting caught on words that shouldn't be there and sentences that don't make sense.
I decided to go ahead and show you what the intro sequence should look like - this could be done by you, or an editor really easily.
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thanks, I have corrected this part of the story
Thanks for the update, and happily awaiting the next part.
Thank you for another great chapter.
I've read the comic and I'm not going to like looking forward to what will happen.
When will the Pyros pop up?
Very good. Very, very good! You did the right thing. oh, by the way, did the two Pyros become one? Because if so then she is the first one to have a full soul, which is actually pretty ironic and... foreflight.exe has stops working due to an overload of data. please try to restart of shut down the program.
Time-Turner was actually pretty well written. good job.
if you make him blow up the school, that's fine by me. How about Soldier steals some of Demo's stickies for the job?
I can say that Luna can survive most small arms, but anything like a 50 cal or bigger can punch through her shields.
And somehow Cadance prevents the Wheat Wars.
Wait, what's Mann Co?
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we're probably not gonna find out, as to my knowledge her homeland wasn't shown, but with the reformation of Changelings, and the voodoo magic bit, she's bound to know more than most about different species