One of the things that warms her heart is that sometimes while she is attending a Foul or fillies nightmare to help a dream version of John would appear and defend them with verousity.
Just something that bothered me. I think the first word in blue should be foal. The second one I couldn't decide which one felt better; ferocity or versatility. Also, the word in red should be filly's just to have the sentence make sense.
Just something that bothered me. I think the first word in blue should be foal.
The second one I couldn't decide which one felt better; ferocity or versatility.
Also, the word in red should be filly's just to have the sentence make sense.
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Thanks. Spelling isn't my specialty. I'll get to work on that.
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Fixed
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I guess I'll start watching for them, if that's the case. Glad to see you actually read your comment section.
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Why wouldn't I? XD