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Spike supervised the exterior design? Guess he really picked up something from spending his time with Rarity
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Well, given how much of his youth he dedicated to being with her it was an inevitability. He may not have her eye for fine detail, but he’s no slouch in the realm of aesthetics either.
The end bit there does nothing for the sentence and is repetitive, I feel it would read much better if it was removed.
I don't believe forest red is a thing. I think you mixed this with Daring a few paragraphs down.
Unneeded capitalization.
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I didn’t even notice those, I’ll get on fixing them soon as possible
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I checked, I only use the expression “forest red” once in the entire chapter.
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I fixed the color description