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Lukington17


British brony, fan for about 7 years now. Here as a writer but also happy to serve as an editor. I particularly enjoy co-writing stories, so hit me up. RD is best pony (obviously)

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This story is a sequel to A Small Issue


A few months have passed since Twilight and some of her friends discovered a microscopic city inside Rainbow Dash's body. When the famous flyer starts behaving odd around her friends, Twilight decides to get an inside story: it may be time to re-enter a tiny world neither she nor her friends ever thought they'd be seeing again so soon.

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I didn’t think about it until now but both the first story and this one reminded me of Osmosis Jones mixed with Fantastic Voyage. Each section of the bodies was wonderfully detailed and descriptive, and all of the characters involved were done perfectly as well.

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delighted to hear you enjoyed it - yes, there was a lot of inspiration from those two, so I'm glad it worked for you!

I love this so much. Please make more stories like this. I love them so much. Keep up the amazing work! :twilightsmile: (I will never stop following you. Your stories so far are amazing!)

One of the best written fics I have ever read. If only it was as long as Fallout Equestria :D

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I was wondering about that too... :duck:

Absolutely LOVED both this and A Small Issue. Are you making another sequel? If so, I've got some ideas to share.

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Dreams that occur in a new setting imply vulnerability and express feelings and sentiments that your not certain how to manage. The warrior who's skin started to tear and afterward the dark mass swung into a cockroach is an indication of the issue itself. You needed to watch this all occur, powerless to stop it. Which ties in with your powerlessness to adapt to whatever issues are at the forefront of your thoughts.

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I really liked this, keep up the good work and share more.

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