Hmm i read the 3 chapters it's interesting I'll track this for now and see how it plays out

Well, guess i'll see where we'll go, eh?

8664551 Indeed. I made this because I noticed that there are quite a small amount of Displaced ruling countries. That, and the idea seemed fun to me, as well as a way for me to try my hand at writing politics.

If he is still alive, you should try to do a cross over with that one Skolas displaced. It would be funny to see Skolas the rabid meet another awoken queen.

9196002 I'll search for him and see what I can do.

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The Crystal Wolves (Rewrite)

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/240563/the-crystal-wolves-rewrite

9196025 Ah, thank you.

Too bad she couldnt get a hunch on how you turned into a genocidal goth teen eh?

Kinda rude of them to simply invite themselves over.

Not very smart to send all your leaders to one place, especially if it might be unsafe.

The fact everyone came, leaving no one to govern Equestria, is a bad move. Even the most stable of governments can't last more than a few days without a head. Well, maybe the American one since we're like a hydra, but a diarchy like Equestria would need at least one princess to stay behind. Not to mention the Crystal Empire being a completely different state, if technically a province of Equestria, would need Cadance to stay behind, maybe Shining could take over, but rarely do those married into royalty actually have a say in the politics.

Point is, having twelve high ranking officials go on a diplomatic trip while leaving their country to itself is a dumb move. Not to mention it feels clunky to even have that many people going on a trip in this sorta story. Really, the smart thing would be to send a diplomat first, then send a person with authority to make decisions on the Princesses' behalf.

Also, the way you introduced them was really, really weird. You really rushed through the introductions, having each character say something stereotypical then giving a brief description of how they look.

Really, shrinking your cast of characters would help the story flow a lot better. Going with a couple OCs as diplomats or delegates would've made the introduction easier, and would've let you spend more time on the personality of the two characters.

You have too many characters that you'll have to balance now. I don't foresee the next chapter being very good.

Seems interesting for now. I feel like this is a bit too fast paced at the moment, and the part with the ponies feels cliche, especially with Rarity. Hopefully this improves!

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Ha belgium could last forever without a gouvernement and it last 2 year until one was elected