This story is a sequel to Glowing Embers
Sunset Shimmer had her chance to start over, but she threw it away to chase after old dreams. Now, though it's not a completely fresh start, she begins again. With a few willing to help, she makes her way through life and tries to make things better. Perhaps better than she once thought possible in this world.
This picks up right after the Fall Formal, and shows scenes in between movies and also Sunset's inner thoughts during the movies.
Part of the Cornerverse-MLP Universe
Part of the Rewritten Set for reasons that will be explained elsewhere.
Rated Teen for swearing and innuendo, along with a handful of darker moments, blood, and non-sexual nudity, but not enough that I can justify tagging it as such so the chapters will come with a warning.
I love this story so much!! It makes me so happy every time it updates!! Keep it up!
Will Luna be apologizing to Sunset as well? For what she said, that really hurt and shows Luna holds a grudge agaisnt Sunset dep down inside.
also I knwo you did Anon A Miss already a short oens hot, so that was it or you be doing a different verision later?
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I hadn't planned a Luna apology, though I might be able to whip one up real quick. Mostly because Luna's was less issue-related and more Magic related, if that makes sense?
As for the Anon-A-Miss story, that is part of the same Canon as this story, so I'm not going to rewrite it. However, there are a few scenes that are related to the events of that fic, so those scenes will have a short summary and also a link to the fic but aren't 'required reading'.
This is a pretty cool story! I love it.......Have to ask now, but is it possible a pairing between sci Twi and Sunset could happen?
Not within this, no. Sorry. Personally, while I do like the ship well enough to enjoy fics/art about it, I don't like it enough to actively ship it. Or at least as anything past a one-sided short-term crush.
How can nudity be non-sexual? Also, you forgot to click on the >> when you replied to diablo4000's comment.
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Well, what times do you take your clothes off that don't involve sex? Specifically in this, it's only top-nudity and non-descriptive, but when it comes to tagging I say 'better safe than sorry'.
Ok confused can you explain what they meant?
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Parental death. Since the only people running the family business are around the main cast's age, it's the only thing that makes sense. One parent died, the other almost did, and is still recovering.
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Aaaaahhh!
While disappointed won't be a Sci Twi Susnet i accept it easily.
Great story and can't wait for more.
Ohhh boy I finished the sequel and managed to get this far. Hoping for more shimmy adventures!
I need more Pinkie covered in puppies in my life! Great chapter.
But FlutterCord...
Best chapter so far.
FORGIVENESS! CAN YOU IMAAAGIINNEEEEE
I really enjoyed your take on the events of Forgotten Friendship. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I really love how caring the girls are! They're so willing to help Sunset out and I like that it's not just because of Twilight.
They sound so sincere in this, somehow. It's great <3
Enjoying this so far c:
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I feel ya
To sleep, perchance to dream...
Wait, pony words found?
Sleep is for the weak..
To be honest, a talking dog is still wierd.
Although Sith lightning would be shocking!
Watt? Wire you looking at me like that? Ohm my God, that would have been awesome! Sure, some resistance is expected, but I keep current on things! The whole fight really amped up things. I'm positive! Don't be so negative! Sound the charge!
Other tarot cards:
Maud Pie is Strength
Luna and Celestia, Moon And Sun
Chrysalis as Empress
Sonata as the Fool, Adagio as High Priestess, Aria as The Star
Or maybe not...
Yehaw!
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I actually planned out an mlp tarot deck! I might need to rework some stuff with the minor arcana, but most people only care about the major arcana anyway.
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You always know, a Working Joe
This paragraph made me think of the song, 'Getting Better'.
A little upbeat for her, I know, but it fits somehow
Nooooo PLEASE CONTINUE THISSSSS🙏😭
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And I like how they accept the culture difference between the two worlds so easily.
Well in this case I agree with sunset. Science has rules to keep people safe as much as possible. When the experiment went haywire the first time she should have stopped it and tried to find out why it went wrong and how to stop it from happening. You can't be just messing around with stuff and hoping to get answers without some safety features in there.
I like this version better because I always felt wallflower was very childish even for a kid to do that to sunset. She erase everyone memory of her because of embarrassing moments till the since she never left anything nobody remembered her. Sunset wasn't at fault for that and if she had talked to anyone about her problem someone would have tried to be her friend.
I thought that the tarot might look like this just not the same card name by the way I love this art soo much i wish the artist made more but I can't find the original artist site
https://derpibooru.org/images/2501617
This is beautiful😍 I just wish to know if there will be more or is this the end of this. Just a fact deep down I'm screaming "MORE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!" but those words were so beautiful for a closing in a series too.😘
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Hahaha oh wait I actually did🤣
the hair color shifting is like her shifting to her new Karma alignment. Welcome to Guardian rank Sunny.
I am thou, thou art I. You have established a new bond. You have befriended the 'Magician', let them be your guide through the ashes of your redemption.
I honestly still think Equestria Girls Sunset and gang are like sophomores during the first movie. How else do you expect it to be acceptable for SciTwi to transfer and was there long enough to experience summer and spring break? And Christmas Holidays.
The last special with the music festival is another summer thing so they're what Juniors going Seniors now?