Ok ill admit it. I am quite liking this rewrite over the old one. Will be fun to see where this goes as you translate your old story into your new more experienced writing style.

I'm liking the new one but I feel like the old one should get finished first.

Holy shit your back!! I can't believe it

And you come back with the rewritten misadventures of DJ nice
I can see this story going along a better path than the last one

oh yea! I almost forgot to tell you to get these normie meme's of my screen so, "GET THESE NORMIE MEMES OF MY SCREEN REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" ok see you later lol

Okey I got to say this. Listen very carefully. A cool dude putting a hot gamer chick in the friend zone is like beyond retarded. It's like actually impossible. There is more chance of like Big Foot going back in time to suck Jesus sausage.

YOU REJECTED A HOT GAMER GIRL?!

Also, glad to see you're back

YES!! I'm so glad you're back to writing. I'm hoping you'll find time to finish up DJ's Guests.

Ilove the rewrite so far can't wait to see what happens next.

I really really like this author's humor but the Japanese otaku culture nose bleed and fear of females is hard to accept in a western fanfic.