• Published 9th Apr 2018
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Ace Ventura : Pony Detective - DoctorPony



Ace somehow arrives in Equestria in his arrival a case opens and he's taking the case

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The Break In

It was 1:00am at the Ponyville Town Zoo. Everything was quiet until a group of four ponies wearing the black suits with only a slit for them to see through, with them the thieves brought a saw blade and lockpicks. The leader of the group had did a signal with his hoof, the unicorn in the group turned the sawblade on and started breaking through.

The sound was loud but silent, the guard who was on duty had fallen into a deep sleep, so the loud sound of the blade hitting the fence didn't wake him up. In minute an a half the blade had cut through the fence perfectly and they went through. The Pegasus in the group went in the tower where the guard was located, he saw that he was dead asleep so he careful as he could moved him to his locker and put him carefully in, then he shut the door, then he took to the ground and met up with his group.

They all saw it, the prized animal of the zoo, a falcon that was a prized possession brought to the zoo by Celestia. They're eyes widened and they saw over the falcon, four guards placed around the cage, but in a few minutes the theives noticed a pattern and thought of a plan the could work.

The earth pony in the group snuck behind one of guards while he was doing his patrol, putting his hoof on the guards mouth, he held it their until he knew he was out. The leader snuck passed the 3rd guard, knocked him unconscious with a silent takedown, then the guards did there checks to make sure everyone's was there.

"Checking" The guard said, the Pegasus flew over and the guard saw him. But it was too late, he mumbled his voice with his wing then knocking him out.

"Check" The last guard said, waiting for the other two to say check in.

He never heard a response, he when to investigate. They were waiting for him all four of them jumped him, no sound ever escaped the guards mouth and then he fell to the ground unconscious like the other 3 guards.

The thieves lockpicked the door to the cage, the unicorn got out their small cage, the bird turned around the thief injecting it with something that would knock it out in a few seconds. It was out cold, the thieves put the bird inside the cage, left the building with the falcon it was a mission accomplished.


Ponyville Town Zoo
7:30am

The Morning comes. The guards wake up to find the bird gone, the guards alert the police. Soon as news breaks out of the event, journalists come to ask the guards questions about the incident wanting to get the story for the newspaper. Meanwhile the Manger of the Zoo is writing letters to the princesses about the incident.

At the Friendship castle Twilight gets a letter from the Zoo telling the news of the stolen falcon while eating breakfeast with Starlight and Spike.

"George the falcon has been stolen!" Twilight said.

"What" Starlight and Spike said.

Twilight nodds her head "Yes, I just got a letter from the zoo itself" She said.

"When did it happen" Spike asked.

"About 1:00 this morning, they were knocked out and when they woke up the guards found George gone" Twilight said.

"They want me to come to the zoo, they said the other princesses also received the letter to come to the door as well, so the Manager can explain more details" She said.

"Why would someone want to take the falcon? " Starlight said.

"I don't know Starlight but what I do know is that we're going to need help with solving this case" Twilight said.

Earth

Surfside Apartments

Time : 10:30am

A car without any damages comes into the driveway and then stops the car door opens and Ace Ventura comes out of it with groceries shutting the car door with the left hand while making a mouth sound. He goes into the building to his room when he hears.

"Ventura" The landlord said.

"Hello again Satan, how are doing not burning me alive" Ace said.

Ace turns around and sees his landlord "Oh it's you, I thought you were someone else"

"Ventura I been hearing some movement in your room, you do remember the no pets allowed rule" He said.

"Yes I dissently remember you saying that, don't worry as I told you before I don't bring my work home with me" Ace said.

The landlord glares at Ace " I'm watching you" He said.

"Don't worry, I’m like a open book, nothing to hide" Ventura said.

The landlord walks away Ace opens the door and shuts it and puts the groceries on the counter then whistles and then all the animals come out of their hiding spots.

Some of them climb on to him and some just stand on the ground and just look at him. After he feed all his animals he gets a feeling, he looks down to see a weird aura around him and he starts fooling around with it as it surrounds his body. The animals go back their hiding spots, but peaking out a little bit to see what's happening to Ace, the aura of envelopes his body then Ace vanishes into thin air not leaving a trace.

Equestria

Ace opens his eyes, he looks around to see he's not in his apartment, but in front of a forest not far from it a few meters is a cottage. He looks at his body to see no bruises and no scratches

"What is this place, am I asleep, am I in hell" Ace asked.

Ace pinch himself that tells him this isn't a dream "ok so I'm not dreaming, second where am I" Ace said.

He gets up and looks at his surroundings the world he was In looked cartoonish even the sky, the grass and the dark omanis forest "Well looks like I'm not in Kansas anymore" Ventura said.

"Wait if I'm a new world then that means there's animals never seen before" he said.

"Ok where do I go the dark omanis looking forest or the path to sunshine and rainbows"

"Hmm I think I'm going to choose sunshine and rainbows" Ace said.

Then he was off on his journey but he did not know that the adventure had just begun and a case was open for him

Author's Note:

I said a long time ago I was going to make a Ace Ventura Story and I delivered.

Sorry if my grammars bad I will use grammerly to help me out later if your reading this second line

(I changed something’s in the chapter that were suddle,

What should happen AcexFluttershy

Comments ( 10 )

He he he he he he

How do you plan on describing the way Ace laughs?

Finally! I've been waiting for an Ace Ventura crossover

oh this is going to be good

Ace Ventura: The ultimate Anon

AAAAAAALLLLRIGHTYY THEN!

Continue please

Sorry, the premise is promising but the punctuation and grammar errors pull me right out.

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Still working on chapter 2

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