Two weeks have passed since the Fall Formal, and Sunset Shimmer finds herself plagued with nightmares and self-loathing. In an effort to break the cycle and try to show her what it means to be friends, a week long series of sleepovers happens where Sunset will learn things she never suspected about each of her newfound friends.
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I look forward to seeing what she learns.
Ooh, possible Call Forward to LoE?
Man, rock really started going downhill in the Paleoarchean.
I'm curious. Why exactly did Rarity and Applejack end up having to do all that yardwork at the Shy household?
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Imagine the events of "Look Before You Sleep," but without the two of them realizing how much damage they were causing.
I agree with you on that timeline you created for sunset. For makes sense when they made the comic showing sunsets down fall it’s shell in the background a young twilight sparkle who had not gotten her cutie mark yet. So it makes sense that it took longer than just two years For sunset to be gone.
Loving it so far!
I am very much intrigued. Great job so far
Is this in the same continuity as "Repercussions"? I was just recalling that one of the girls (Think it was AJ) telling Sci-Twi that she and the others had helped Sunset through her nightmares via sleepover.
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My current Equestrian Girls timeline, including which stories of mine are included in it, is located here.
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Nice! Thanks. ^_^ I hope you get around to continuing "A is For...", I've got a couple of ideas on what the other A's might be, and maybe who for. ^_^
Okay, I just realized that the asterisks next to the A's aren't in a random order. (On the cover picture) There goes my theory of one of them being Autistic and one of them being Altruist.
Thank you so much for the new chapter.
Keep going (hope I'll get to your stories soon enough for high praising but long story short your in a top among all my favourites and I'm entertained for what you'll do next)!
This chapter was both hilarious and heartwarming. I loved it!
I enjoyed this chapter.
Man I like this version of Fluttershy.
Sunset and Fluttershy casually discussing murdering her brother. this made my night.
Or, if needed, a brother.
I wonder if that's also a pseudonym... If so, Watermelody comes to mind.
Small typo:
picked up
Another small typo
Great work with this chapter.
Okay, this was great.
Loved those board games!
And also, the ending of this chapter was adorable.
So, next up is Pinkie or Rainbow. Wonder how that will turn out. (Especially with Rainbow's parents... God, I can only hope they aren't as loony as their Equestrian counterparts...)
This is an amazing chapter! Both hilarious and sweet. <3 A great combo
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Plus, Zephyr was probably there. I blame him.
This was a cute chapter. Except for Zephyr, who can die in a fire.
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Who is that?
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Okay, it's not her official name -- she doesn't have one yet -- but... her.
Much adorable, and I liked how you balanced Fluttershy being sweet and caring with still being able to be annoyed and make morbid jokes.
I suspect Fluttershy would love the game Gloom. Though she'd be tempted to help Zephyr win...
Could You tell me, will You continue the story?
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Working on it. Just have a couple of other projects in front of it.
Even if this story never continues, this chapter was definitely worth reading.
Man, this was a really solid follow-up.
Between this and In the Days That Followed, you write some really strong character interactions.
Fluttershy is great. This is a wonderful story, and I'm really looking forward to seeing it continued.
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And it looks like I don't even have to ask if/when it will be.
Bitch look, if you don't want to do it just say so.
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Good Day. Will You continue the story? It is good, and I want to translste It in time.
This story is an absolute treasure. It has everything--funny stuff, provoking stuff, cute stuff, sad stuff, uplifting stuff... I really hope to see it continue soon. You've done a wonderful job with it.
Dayum!
All hail Sassyshy!
Wonderful stuff. I especially love how Zephyr brings out the worst in Fluttershy in the best ways. Looking forward to more whenever it may come.
Decided to give this a try, and WOW. That was so adorable! If you ever need a break from Consequences, I most definitely wouldn't mind reading more of this!
So far we have Asexual (AJ) Atheist (Rarity) and Author (Fluttershy)
I look forward to reading more of this whenever you decide to continue it! The characters feel very authentic and I found it mildly amusing that you phoneticized Rarity's verbal tic when she's being dismissive.
Also I love this series. It's a nice exploration into their characters
I particularly love this chapter because it fits what I expect from rarity.
She's incredibly skilled and all that skill is hers. It's not because she's "gifted" or given that skill from something. She worked hard and earned every bit of success she'll gain.
An artist without motivation is truly lost.
I've always been so focused on potential scenarios involving Sunset Shimmer *long* after the events of the movies/specials. It's rare that I imagine her mindset just *days* after the start of her face-turn. Although, I guess, she's technically not face-turned yet. Easy to take for granted the sheer verticality of her struggle.
Pinkie Pie's plan is so cute and pure. Nice, simple, straight-forward premise.
Emotional roller coaster, this chapter. Applejack's a tough act to follow. SO serious out of the gate. It's good for Sunset, though. She gets a very solid foundation to start with.
Wasn’t quite expecting that A-word for Rarity. Makes sense, I suppose. She is always pursuing her own means of “immortality.”
I think Sweetie Belle was trying to protect her older sister in a way, while also being abrasively precocious. I wouldn’t mind hearing more from Hondo and his dad jokes.
I laughed out loud at moments in this chapter. The scene transitions were legitimately great.
While it probably would have made for smexy drama to have things boil hotter with Zephyr, I’m personally glad it didn’t go in that direction. You had a far better focus in mind.
The pattern of these installments, it seems, is to reveal the nature of the A-word towards the very end, when Sunset finally has a heart-to-heart with the titular character. There isn’t a whole lot of foreshadowing that prompts us to look for the word reveal.
Not necessarily a bad thing. Just an observation.
I kind of like that you made Applejack asexual, but pinky is very much not asexual and she's the only character that I had Canon on the a spectrum that I cannot see being completely aloe, and you know if she was aloe I hate pinky being freaky personally, she mainly those parties for kids that had Ken and Willie creeps me out