An unnamed colt falls into a dark cave, trapped for days on end. The nights are cold, and the days are spent figuring out how to survive the night. He has a lot of time to think, seeing as he has all this alone time. However, things happen that suggest that he isn't the only thing down there...
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Ass creep, I was reading this at night...
While i think this story would of been more intriguing with one of the mane Cast as the main character, i still think its alright.
I will track this and see if this becomes a Grand story and not a disappointment .
Cheers
~Iraqlobstah
This is a pretty cool story! Creepy, and what exactly everything is and what it's caused by is never clearly explain, which I thought made it really good!
shit, i dont think ill be able to sleep at night, FFFFUUUUUUUUUU
GREAT STORY!!!
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So you insult me, and rate my story half a star because it scared you? Not to toot my own horn, but shouldn't that fact that it scared you make it good?
eeeey dids is coooool.
n tihs is exactly why i now wnader around my house with a fallout 3 laser rifle prop
I am esriously afraid of the dark and I keep seeing things in it
And that is also why I have a shoulder-mounted flashlight at every ocassion
"My shadow moved.
That sentence....Just. That. Fucking. Sentence
There is one pony that comes to mind when this is read... that pink horse wrapped in bandages in the "Read it and Weep" episode... even if it doesn't fit. Honestly though, this is awesome... creepy but awesome.
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I wanted to leave the ending as ambiguous. Sorry that it disappoints people but I don't really think I can add to this story.
something fucked happened when I finished reading my cat was siting in the hall it was dark and he looking at me so when I turned around and saw him I damn near pissed myself.