Two young ponies on the cusp of adulthood are slowly being consumed by lust. Both will find that their destiny was far greater than they could have imagined. But when fate puts them on opposite sides of an ancient conflict, who will prevail?
Nice. Spike is going to be scared for Life, well.... If the Absta win. Anyway, great chapter. Next time, i'm betting its sibling war:s part 1. Great job.
Im sorry but im only reading for pounds perspective hes the protagonist in my eyes here mainpy because regardless of the rape at least his side isnt boring as hell i get the absta are supposed to be the good guys but they are boring lets face it pumpkins perspective is boring training with next to nothing going on while pounds training involves experience aka doing something interesting
"He nodded. "Yes, I feel them too, and you're correct about the situation. They're likely just enjoying their time together in a healthy relationship. As long as a couple is in private, we just leave them be."
Pumpkin still thought the whole concept of sex was disgusting, but accepted that it was a necessary part of life for most ponies. It would be intrusive and rude to interfere."
Ok, I'm glad you addressed this. Sex is not evil, and it's entirely unsympathetic to portray your protagonist as considering it so.
Nice. Spike is going to be scared for Life, well.... If the Absta win. Anyway, great chapter. Next time, i'm betting its sibling war:s part 1. Great job.
Im sorry but im only reading for pounds perspective hes the protagonist in my eyes here mainpy because regardless of the rape at least his side isnt boring as hell i get the absta are supposed to be the good guys but they are boring lets face it pumpkins perspective is boring training with next to nothing going on while pounds training involves experience aka doing something interesting
"He nodded. "Yes, I feel them too, and you're correct about the situation. They're likely just enjoying their time together in a healthy relationship. As long as a couple is in private, we just leave them be."
Pumpkin still thought the whole concept of sex was disgusting, but accepted that it was a necessary part of life for most ponies. It would be intrusive and rude to interfere."
Ok, I'm glad you addressed this. Sex is not evil, and it's entirely unsympathetic to portray your protagonist as considering it so.